The psychic
A monologue10 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Good entry for the This is serious writing prompt contest. You chose a very serious topic and turned it to humor as the contest requires. Good job. Good luck in the contest.
I like the Gypsy theme :)
Gypsy
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Good entry for the This is serious writing prompt contest. You chose a very serious topic and turned it to humor as the contest requires. Good job. Good luck in the contest.
I like the Gypsy theme :)
Gypsy
Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Many thanks Gypsy. I wrote it for you. Lol.
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Thank you! I'm honored :)
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 'This is Serious' writing prompt.
This well rhymed, jaunty verse tells a clear story.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 'This is Serious' writing prompt.
This well rhymed, jaunty verse tells a clear story.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Thanks Sharon
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the psychic who takes your money and tell you all about the great future awaits you, but most of it are lies just to make you feel okay with the money she took from you.
Typo
wearng(wearing) a bandanna
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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A very well-written poem about the psychic who takes your money and tell you all about the great future awaits you, but most of it are lies just to make you feel okay with the money she took from you.
Typo
wearng(wearing) a bandanna
Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Many thanks Sandra for reviewing and pointing out the typo. Much appreciated.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Your poem is unique and creative. I hope it does well as an entry for the This is serious poem writing prompt. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Your poem is unique and creative. I hope it does well as an entry for the This is serious poem writing prompt. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Thanks so much
Comment from Becky Kern-Taylor
Darling, your rhythmes are so off and your timing also.
Now I hate to criticize but here ae some changes.
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1 ok
2 I hope you all like it
3 ok
4 ok
5 ok
6 ok
7 Wear a bandana
8 ok
9 Predicting the future.
10 For some worried folk
11 They think that I'm serious.
12 I'm actually a joke.
13 They pay me with cash.
14 OK
15 I speak very brash.
16 Although always lies.
17 I tell them I see.
18 You're future is bright.
19 Just listen to me
20 And all will be right.
21 I fake all these powers.
22 But surely you know.
23 I do this for hours.
24 And make lots of dough.
I am being very presumptuous and have no idea how you will accept this or even if you will like it.
Now you can correct this poem. But I don't know how to do it.
This is done with love not hate or envy.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Darling, your rhythmes are so off and your timing also.
Now I hate to criticize but here ae some changes.
Line
1 ok
2 I hope you all like it
3 ok
4 ok
5 ok
6 ok
7 Wear a bandana
8 ok
9 Predicting the future.
10 For some worried folk
11 They think that I'm serious.
12 I'm actually a joke.
13 They pay me with cash.
14 OK
15 I speak very brash.
16 Although always lies.
17 I tell them I see.
18 You're future is bright.
19 Just listen to me
20 And all will be right.
21 I fake all these powers.
22 But surely you know.
23 I do this for hours.
24 And make lots of dough.
I am being very presumptuous and have no idea how you will accept this or even if you will like it.
Now you can correct this poem. But I don't know how to do it.
This is done with love not hate or envy.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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No comment
Comment from zanya
A very interesting poetic reflection on 'being a psychic' - wonder if such powers really do exist - people continue to believe they do - thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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A very interesting poetic reflection on 'being a psychic' - wonder if such powers really do exist - people continue to believe they do - thanks for sharing
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Many thanks
Comment from equestrik
I think this is the truth so many times with so many psychics. You have done a good job of portraying this while still sharing the value of a psychic's positive words.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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I think this is the truth so many times with so many psychics. You have done a good job of portraying this while still sharing the value of a psychic's positive words.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Many thanks.
Comment from roof35
This is well done and you actually figured out what the contest was all about. I found that writing prompt confusing the way it was written. I like your illustration. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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This is well done and you actually figured out what the contest was all about. I found that writing prompt confusing the way it was written. I like your illustration. Nicely done.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Many thanks
Comment from H. Darwin Reeves
I like the honesty. We all know that the psychic is basically a scam, but it does give some a sense of peace. And it is a source of income and we all love entrepreneurs. Fun read. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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I like the honesty. We all know that the psychic is basically a scam, but it does give some a sense of peace. And it is a source of income and we all love entrepreneurs. Fun read. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Many thanks
Comment from A Little Bird
Congratulations on this amusing piece. I've never in all my life had a psychic read my future... it's on my bucket list though! Next time I see one and have a bit of spare cash I'll give it a shot I think. Good luck with the competition!
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Congratulations on this amusing piece. I've never in all my life had a psychic read my future... it's on my bucket list though! Next time I see one and have a bit of spare cash I'll give it a shot I think. Good luck with the competition!
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Many thanks
