My Poetic Potting Shed
Nonets on the Nines23 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Melissa,
What a cute little shed. I can see how the flowers and light around it could inspire poetry. All you need is a little pink table to go with the chair and you could write up a storm.
I like the internal and end rhyme in this nonet which uses nature as a metaphor.
Keep writng and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
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Melissa,
What a cute little shed. I can see how the flowers and light around it could inspire poetry. All you need is a little pink table to go with the chair and you could write up a storm.
I like the internal and end rhyme in this nonet which uses nature as a metaphor.
Keep writng and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much Joan!! Hope you are having a great Sunday!!
Melissa
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You are most kindly welcome, Melissa.
Joan
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a lovely vision for the poet and writer alike!! ;) Love the thought, although I'm sure my office will have to do... ;) :) :) Thanx for sharing 'on the nines'! ;) Yvette
Be sure to pop back in there and remove the gnome graffiti from your author notes... ;)
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
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What a lovely vision for the poet and writer alike!! ;) Love the thought, although I'm sure my office will have to do... ;) :) :) Thanx for sharing 'on the nines'! ;) Yvette
Be sure to pop back in there and remove the gnome graffiti from your author notes... ;)
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
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Hi Yvette! Thanks so much... sorry for the tardy reply. :)
Melissa
Comment from The Death
Hi Melissa,
I loved the garden theme you have chosen to show how your words bloom. The thought of poet's shed is quite interesting. I guess everyone would have want to have one. Excellent word economy. Nice use of random rhyme. Fine use of alliteration as well.
Regards,
Anupam
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
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Hi Melissa,
I loved the garden theme you have chosen to show how your words bloom. The thought of poet's shed is quite interesting. I guess everyone would have want to have one. Excellent word economy. Nice use of random rhyme. Fine use of alliteration as well.
Regards,
Anupam
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
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Hi Anupam! Thanks so much... sorry for the tardy reply. :)
Melissa
Comment from June Sargent
If I were to have a potting shed, that's what it would look like! I love the imagery in this nonet of a poetic shed where you pick and nourich words to see how they bloom into a masterpiece. Very creative piece.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
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If I were to have a potting shed, that's what it would look like! I love the imagery in this nonet of a poetic shed where you pick and nourich words to see how they bloom into a masterpiece. Very creative piece.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
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I really appreciate your lovely words and review, June. Thanks, my friend!!
Melissa
Comment from judiverse
I'd take that shed in your picture. It's charming. Lovely nonet. You have it centered so beautifully. I like your comparison of your writing to seedlings that sprout and like flowers they have to be plucked pruned, nourished. Excellent words there, and great alliteration with pluck and prune. Beautifully done. judi
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
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I'd take that shed in your picture. It's charming. Lovely nonet. You have it centered so beautifully. I like your comparison of your writing to seedlings that sprout and like flowers they have to be plucked pruned, nourished. Excellent words there, and great alliteration with pluck and prune. Beautifully done. judi
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
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Hi Judi! Thanks so much... sorry for the tardy reply. :)
Melissa
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You're very welcome. No problem. It seems that my in box is always full. judi
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Melissa, what a lovely nonet. It is written in perfect form and the subject I like very much. A nice thought, your own little shed to tuck yourself away and write poetry. Hope you achieve it. Warm regards Dorothy xx
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
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Hello Melissa, what a lovely nonet. It is written in perfect form and the subject I like very much. A nice thought, your own little shed to tuck yourself away and write poetry. Hope you achieve it. Warm regards Dorothy xx
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
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Thanks for your lovely words and response Dorothy!!
Melissa
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Melissa, your syllable count is spot on and you have a nice V form for your Nonet. I LOVE the picture. If I were able, I have a potters shed that I could fix up to look like this one, but those days are over for me. Lovely thoughts and good luck with your poet's shed. I suppose I could do that one. LOL Nancy:)
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Melissa, your syllable count is spot on and you have a nice V form for your Nonet. I LOVE the picture. If I were able, I have a potters shed that I could fix up to look like this one, but those days are over for me. Lovely thoughts and good luck with your poet's shed. I suppose I could do that one. LOL Nancy:)
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Hi Nancy.... Thanks so much. I have always wanted a ... She Shed... where I could hideaway and write poetry and putter with my plants.... maybe someday! Thanks again!
Melissa
Comment from Mistydawn
What a great poem. I love how you compared your thoughts to young sprouts trying to make their way into this world. It might your poem colorful, descriptive. I love your picture. Wish I had one of them in my backyard.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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What a great poem. I love how you compared your thoughts to young sprouts trying to make their way into this world. It might your poem colorful, descriptive. I love your picture. Wish I had one of them in my backyard.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Hello Misty.... I so want a .. She Shed.. where I can write and putter with my plants. LOL. I thank you for your lovely and insightful review!!
Melissa
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I have a she-shed in mind too. It's going to have purple shag carpet and one of those electric fireplaces where I can watch the flames dance when I write. It's going to have a desk, chair, loveseat, coffee maker and snacks. Gotta have my coffee and brain food.
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I love how you will decorate it! I think your coffee bar sounds divine... I would keep mine stocked with chocolate and Biscoff cookies ;)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Nonet about a special place where a poet can escape to when the muse needs to be productive. A space where poems are born.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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A very well-written Nonet about a special place where a poet can escape to when the muse needs to be productive. A space where poems are born.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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I appreciate your lovely review, Sandra. Thank you.
Melissa
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Melissa!
Oh! I would love a poet's shed as well! Actually, I would love a gardener's shed, but it is not allowed in our subdivision! I keep telling my husband that we could "sneak" one in somehow! :)
A wonderful and carefree offering in top-notch Nonet form!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Hello Melissa!
Oh! I would love a poet's shed as well! Actually, I would love a gardener's shed, but it is not allowed in our subdivision! I keep telling my husband that we could "sneak" one in somehow! :)
A wonderful and carefree offering in top-notch Nonet form!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Haha, I think you should definitely... sneak.. one in too. It would be so wonderful to have a She-Shed just for me. I seem to have to share this entire house with work-at-home men... for the moment ~ very distracting. :)
Thank you, sweet Diane!
