Dawn's Favorite Poems, Vol. 4
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Humbly Your Child"eclectic poetry favorites from 2017 & 2018
7 total reviews
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Oh Dawn, what a beautiful recording by Perry Como. And you are humble, very much so. I love these verses, you are so clever. You are praying and rhyming at the same time, so lovely. Giddy
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Oh Dawn, what a beautiful recording by Perry Como. And you are humble, very much so. I love these verses, you are so clever. You are praying and rhyming at the same time, so lovely. Giddy
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That is a beautiful prayer, Dawn, and should have been entered into a contest. Your words are such that it could be classed as a universal prayer, because I doubt there are many out there who could not be saying the same thing. We can learn by your mistakes, and also try to remember God is with us regardless of our mistakes. Superb, my friend. Warm hugs. Sandra xxx
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That is a beautiful prayer, Dawn, and should have been entered into a contest. Your words are such that it could be classed as a universal prayer, because I doubt there are many out there who could not be saying the same thing. We can learn by your mistakes, and also try to remember God is with us regardless of our mistakes. Superb, my friend. Warm hugs. Sandra xxx
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
Comment from Joan E.
Sometimes it's not a matter of knowing what to, but just doing it!! Thank you for sharing your faith in God and not being alone, and knowing that it is human to make mistakes. Sighs- Joan
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Sometimes it's not a matter of knowing what to, but just doing it!! Thank you for sharing your faith in God and not being alone, and knowing that it is human to make mistakes. Sighs- Joan
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Thank you! Sorry for the late reply (and for a c & p response)!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
You have promoted a righteous thought for righteous living; if we care for living and make the least sins but do our job perfectly, God's grace we get ever; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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You have promoted a righteous thought for righteous living; if we care for living and make the least sins but do our job perfectly, God's grace we get ever; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem reads like a prayer, Dawn. Its presentation is great--love the image, the rhyme scheme, the smooth flow, and above all else the strong message that we could all use. Your video choice was great, too. I love the message on the image. Your notes allude to a great world this would be if all did as you wrote.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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Your poem reads like a prayer, Dawn. Its presentation is great--love the image, the rhyme scheme, the smooth flow, and above all else the strong message that we could all use. Your video choice was great, too. I love the message on the image. Your notes allude to a great world this would be if all did as you wrote.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and very well written poem full of beautiful words, beautiful imagery and very beautiful music. I needed to hear this today. I make mistakes a lot, but I don't try to. May God bless you! love, Teri
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This is a very beautiful and very well written poem full of beautiful words, beautiful imagery and very beautiful music. I needed to hear this today. I make mistakes a lot, but I don't try to. May God bless you! love, Teri
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
Comment from robyn corum
Dawn,
What a beautiful and poetic prayer. It's absolutely lovely. It reminds me of one of my favorite Bible verses that says God's mercies are fresh every morning. -- And thank heaven that they are! It's wonderful to know that He's willing to start fresh with a clean slate with me each day. I mean, I'm not even willing to do that with MYSELF. Isn't that crazy?
Anyway, this was beautiful. Thank you!
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Dawn,
What a beautiful and poetic prayer. It's absolutely lovely. It reminds me of one of my favorite Bible verses that says God's mercies are fresh every morning. -- And thank heaven that they are! It's wonderful to know that He's willing to start fresh with a clean slate with me each day. I mean, I'm not even willing to do that with MYSELF. Isn't that crazy?
Anyway, this was beautiful. Thank you!
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
