Comment from cdefan

Excellent

Very touching chapter. Enjoyed the emotions between your characters especially with Jace and Tessa. You always seem to make a tragic situation into a positive one. I like that about your writing.

Great chapter as always.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020

Thanks cdefan :)

So glad you enjoyed this chapter. I'm so thankful for your support. I will do my best to keep you entertained with more Breedline adventures.

Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

You've been writing a succession of brilliant stories with these shorter ones you've engaged in. I love the emotion that oozes from every syllable and word you've created, for those of us who've enjoyed the birth of their children, and changed their nappies without a care that it was, what it was. Love covers a multitude of sons as the saying goes, joyous emotion fills every crevasse of the heart, and that's what this excellent episode did. Beautifully and outstandingly written Shana, your friend, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020

Thank you, Roy :)

I appreciate your encouraging words and dedicated support. I've finally completed rewriting this book and now it's off to the editor in Oct. when he can get to editing it. Hopefully I can get the first 2 revised after this one and published in Amazon so I can get away from my other publishing company. They are not turning in my royalties and that is so wrong. There are so many evil and corrupt people out there. But I'm a true believer in Karma.

Thanks again my friend.
Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 27-Aug-2020

Always a pleasure

Comment from ngage

Excellent

This was a excellent chapter, Ms. Shana. The artwork drew my attention right away.
I'm glad Tessa and her babies are okay. Whew! You really put a great deal of raw emotion in this chapter and ended it with a funny moment between Jace and Tessa's father. That was a nice way to end it. I definitely had a smile on my face.

Superb writing as always my friend!

Nate

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020

Thanks Nate :)

I told you my story would have a happy ending. :) I'm a true believer on good overcomes evil. My story will always be this way.

Thanks for all your encouragement and support!
Stay safe my friend!
Shana :)

Comment from fm wright

Exceptional

This chapter was certainly full of emotion of one kind or another from beginning to end. I like how you wrapped it all up, yet left possibilities open for the future.The artwork is spectacular.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020

Thank so much, Faye :)

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and how it ended. There is more to the story, but not sure if I will add that part. It's all about family and support for Tessa and the others. Thanks for mentioning the artwork. I found it on Facebook. I thought it was beautiful and fitting.

Thanks again for your kind words and support!
Stay safe my friend!
Hugs,
Shana :)

reply by fm wright on 27-Aug-2020

You are so welcome. I like what you included, however I also agree about what you chose to leave out.
Hugs to you,my friend, Shana.
Faye

Comment from Mistydawn

Exceptional

I wish I would've thought of that rule when my babies were little. Not that anyone would agree, lol. I'm so glad Tessa and the babies are alright. Lucky her not to have a nasty c-section scar. Your chapter is very well-written, interesting, suspenseful. I was so hoping he would be able to heal her, that it wasn't too late. I enjoyed your bit of humor at the end. Nicely done as always. I look forward to reading more.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020

Thank you, Mistydawn :)

I agree with the baby rule too! Haha! I thought that was something Jace would say. He's very loving and will be there for his family, although he has no filter at times. That's what I love about him. His twin brother Jem has always been his caretaker and would do just about anything for Jace.
Thanks for all the encouraging words and dedicated support! I appreciate you, girl!

Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Here again, it is nice to mention, I like and have enjoyed the read, and orderly taletelling of this supernatural fiction; fostered by orderly plot development, fostered by a few realistic and contributory dialogues; still I do not like the beginning for it is not catchy but I like the ending; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020

Thank you, Alcreator Litt Dear :)

I appreciate your kind feedback and support! You have been a great motivator for me.

Stay safe and thanks again,
Shana :)