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Set Them Free

15 Syllables Contest Entry

4 total reviews 
Comment from GregoryCody
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Ch in children goes so well with age in Courage.

Great tools used in this so it flows really really well when read aloud!

It's hard to make something with impact in only so meant words.

Great message.

Oh No!! I was going to give this SIX. I don't have any! I'm sorry. Maybe next week :)

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2021
    lol. I don't worry about stars but your thoughts on this are sweet. Thank you for this great review. These are lovely comments and much appreciated. I remember this post. It was fun. Thank you again, Greg. Have a great weekend! Lynda
Comment from LisaMay
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Hey Sis - you've honed 15 syllables into a nice little encouragement for our children to live their best lives. Congratulations for your well deserved win! (Nice photo... but I feel a sneeze coming on with hayfever!)

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
    lol. I've been sneezing for two months. Enough already! Thank you girlfriend for the review and stars. Good to hear from you. This was yet another collaboration only it was my turn to post. Glad you liked it. I'll get back to you eventually. You know the drill..... lol
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This is a great message about flourishing and thriving at greatness, we should teach our children to live in courage which is strength to sow the seed of greatness; well said. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
    This is a terrific review, Alcreator, and I thank you for these kind comments. Also thanks for all those stars! Much appreciated.
Comment from Aaron Milavec
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Simple, direct, compelling. I can only think that if the second line had read "that courage is the strength," it would have read more easily but been disqualified as toooooooooooooooo long.

Well done harmony with pic,
Aaron

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
    HAHA! tooooooooo long. Thank you, Aaron, for this great review. Yes, fifteen syllables is restrictive so you have to do what you can do to make sure you're not disqualified. I appreciate you taking the time to read this and I thank you for all those stars. Thanks!