Armageddon
Three Line Poetry Contest20 total reviews
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is excellent writing. Angel gently weeps as the wicked conquer grace. Armageddon comes. You have an awesome photo that works well with your words. We are all gloom and doom at some point Especially with so many challenging events happening.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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This is excellent writing. Angel gently weeps as the wicked conquer grace. Armageddon comes. You have an awesome photo that works well with your words. We are all gloom and doom at some point Especially with so many challenging events happening.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for the lovely review.
Comment from Pantygynt
Some days it surely seems that this three liner is telling the truth. Listen out for the four horsemen to come riding. When you hear them You will know you are right. This is compliant withing the form required by the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Some days it surely seems that this three liner is telling the truth. Listen out for the four horsemen to come riding. When you hear them You will know you are right. This is compliant withing the form required by the contest.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Thank you for taking the time to review this tiny poem
Comment from roof35
This certainly does provoke doom and gloom. You said a lot in three lines. Your illustration pairs perfectly and sets the stage for your words. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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This certainly does provoke doom and gloom. You said a lot in three lines. Your illustration pairs perfectly and sets the stage for your words. Nicely done.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the lovely review
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A very emotional and thought-provoking offering for the contest, Val -- and it is so true: hard these days to keep up that 'positive' attitude when things seem to 'stack up', yeah? :/ :/ Well done and best of luck in the contest! ;)
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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A very emotional and thought-provoking offering for the contest, Val -- and it is so true: hard these days to keep up that 'positive' attitude when things seem to 'stack up', yeah? :/ :/ Well done and best of luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for this lovely review.
Comment from Justin Chopin
Well done Val. I thought the image of you used of a sorrowful angel weeping over all of the chaos and confusion that has been happening during this year was great. I've had those same thoughts about the world ending too so I can relate to your thinking that Armageddon may be coming soon. Fantastic job with the poetry.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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Well done Val. I thought the image of you used of a sorrowful angel weeping over all of the chaos and confusion that has been happening during this year was great. I've had those same thoughts about the world ending too so I can relate to your thinking that Armageddon may be coming soon. Fantastic job with the poetry.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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Thank you for this lovely and thoughtful review. I hope Armageddon won't be coming soon, but things needs to change.
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You're welcome.
Comment from mermaids
I like the image of the angel weeping, for during these times angels are weeping. Excellent poem that is relevant to today and gives the reader much to contemplate. Excellent three line poem.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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I like the image of the angel weeping, for during these times angels are weeping. Excellent poem that is relevant to today and gives the reader much to contemplate. Excellent three line poem.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the lovely review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Going through the daily difficulties of pandemic, hurricanes, tornadoes, huge fires, and now rioting in our streets, if has to make us think. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Going through the daily difficulties of pandemic, hurricanes, tornadoes, huge fires, and now rioting in our streets, if has to make us think. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Thank you for reviewing. Val
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
Absolutely agree. The poem should convey something. At least it should be "felt". That could be joy, but very often it is rage or sadness. Armagedon makes me think, which was your aim. Well done!
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Absolutely agree. The poem should convey something. At least it should be "felt". That could be joy, but very often it is rage or sadness. Armagedon makes me think, which was your aim. Well done!
Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the review.
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Welcome
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Yes, this poem does give readers much to think about esp in these troubled times across the globe. Your image is a good pairing with your contest entry. I believe the word Armagedon is written this way-->Armageddon / and the 2nd line has only 6 rather than 7 syllables (wicked = 1)
If I'm mistaken, please forgive me.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Yes, this poem does give readers much to think about esp in these troubled times across the globe. Your image is a good pairing with your contest entry. I believe the word Armagedon is written this way-->Armageddon / and the 2nd line has only 6 rather than 7 syllables (wicked = 1)
If I'm mistaken, please forgive me.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Jan, you were right about Armageddon (though I have seen it spelled both ways). I have taken your advice on that. You are wrong about wicked, as I have checked it out twice. None the less, thank you for the input. Val
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Please forgive me if I upset you.
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You didn't upset me, as you were right on one count but not on the other. I appreciate the input. I am on this site to get honest feedback, and yours was.
Comment from Ayan3
That was an amazing poem and I hope you can write more stories and I also could not stop reading it and I hope you get the recognition you need for this poem.
Sincerely, Ayan
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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That was an amazing poem and I hope you can write more stories and I also could not stop reading it and I hope you get the recognition you need for this poem.
Sincerely, Ayan
Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Thank you for this lovely review.
