Nature Made ; )
Naturally Sweet ; )11 total reviews
Comment from Aaron Milavec
I find the charcoal drawing first rate. The sexual metaphors are also well done. What the poem needs, however, is a climax.
Lovely Twin Peaks --> Lovely twin peaks
Joyfully,
Aaron
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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I find the charcoal drawing first rate. The sexual metaphors are also well done. What the poem needs, however, is a climax.
Lovely Twin Peaks --> Lovely twin peaks
Joyfully,
Aaron
Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Thank you for reviewing my poem, and for your interesting insight. :)
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Thi8s is my favorite concept: "A woman can be like a bird in the trees, quite hard to catch, she flits away just to tease." It is very true. You have used good metaphors and similes. These will draw the reader in.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Thi8s is my favorite concept: "A woman can be like a bird in the trees, quite hard to catch, she flits away just to tease." It is very true. You have used good metaphors and similes. These will draw the reader in.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Thank you for this nice review, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Mia Twysted
I love the power this piece seems to give to women. I had a hard time finding the beat of the piece and there were places hat felt out of sync. However, I liked how you mashed the woman together with a man showing the desire one could have.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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I love the power this piece seems to give to women. I had a hard time finding the beat of the piece and there were places hat felt out of sync. However, I liked how you mashed the woman together with a man showing the desire one could have.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Thank you for this nice review, I appreciate you reading my poem. :)
Comment from Gracie619
How cleverly written and what a great ideas for comparison! You have done an excellent job here that had me reading this more than once just for the fun of it. Best of luck to you in this contest!
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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How cleverly written and what a great ideas for comparison! You have done an excellent job here that had me reading this more than once just for the fun of it. Best of luck to you in this contest!
Comment Written 24-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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I'm so glad you liked it, that means a lot to me. It was fun to write. :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Nice entry for the Women and sexy things writing prompt contest. You followed the rules well.
You compared to nature. That can be sexual.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Nice entry for the Women and sexy things writing prompt contest. You followed the rules well.
You compared to nature. That can be sexual.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. :)
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This poem is a great entry for the Women and sexy things writing prompt. There is truth in a few words. Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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This poem is a great entry for the Women and sexy things writing prompt. There is truth in a few words. Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 24-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for this nice review. :)
Comment from Sheila Golding
Yes , this certainly is true to the competition prompt.
Well done for this, wish you good luck in the competition, as long as you don't beat me ð???ð???
Good luck.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Yes , this certainly is true to the competition prompt.
Well done for this, wish you good luck in the competition, as long as you don't beat me ð???ð???
Good luck.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Thank you . good luck to you as well. :)
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Thanks, think mine is a long shot to be honest 😄
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Good presentation well written to fit the requirements of the contest. Very descriptive of a woman's body indirectly and cunningly done. Now I'm wondering if your you had a typo in your spelling for flirt where you had "She flits away just to tease!" Seductive silhouette!
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Good presentation well written to fit the requirements of the contest. Very descriptive of a woman's body indirectly and cunningly done. Now I'm wondering if your you had a typo in your spelling for flirt where you had "She flits away just to tease!" Seductive silhouette!
Comment Written 24-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Thank you for reading. I actually meant to say flit, like what a bird does....I may be using it the wrong way...lol. Thanks for reading. :)
Comment from LisaMay
Very cleverly done, bringing in so many similes to describe the physical landscape and the recipe for sexual attraction and exploration without being "too close to the bone" so to speak. I like yours the best so far.
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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Very cleverly done, bringing in so many similes to describe the physical landscape and the recipe for sexual attraction and exploration without being "too close to the bone" so to speak. I like yours the best so far.
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Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you, I'm glad you like it. There's some competition for sure, but it was fun to write. :)
Comment from lancellot
Ah, I think you hit upon the right spot with this one. Yes, this really describes the sexiness of a woman from most men's and a few women's perspective. I can see this one taking first place and the entire honey pot.
Perfect in every way. And you didn't go too far as to need the wall.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Ah, I think you hit upon the right spot with this one. Yes, this really describes the sexiness of a woman from most men's and a few women's perspective. I can see this one taking first place and the entire honey pot.
Perfect in every way. And you didn't go too far as to need the wall.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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I'm so excited to get this great review, thank you! It was fun to write. :)
