The Living Sea
A Trichain for the Potlatch Challenge26 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
The Living Sea
by June Sargent
Hello, June,
Cool entry for the Trichain for the Potlatch Challenge. Lovely presentation. We are stewards of our planet and must take care of it better. Well done my friend.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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The Living Sea
by June Sargent
Hello, June,
Cool entry for the Trichain for the Potlatch Challenge. Lovely presentation. We are stewards of our planet and must take care of it better. Well done my friend.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your empathetic review. We are caretakers of this planet.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written trichain about the ocean who takes up most of the earth and it holds a variety of secrets human did not discovered yet. Most of our waste land into the ocean that may cause earth to die and end us all.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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A very well-written trichain about the ocean who takes up most of the earth and it holds a variety of secrets human did not discovered yet. Most of our waste land into the ocean that may cause earth to die and end us all.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your empathetic review of our planet's resources.
Comment from Bill Schott
This trichain, The Living Sea, has the proper formatting and delivers the inconvenient truth that we are flushing our world away and someday the roto-rooter of reality will make us all pay.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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This trichain, The Living Sea, has the proper formatting and delivers the inconvenient truth that we are flushing our world away and someday the roto-rooter of reality will make us all pay.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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I do like your insightful interpretation of this poem! Thank you for your empathetic review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine poem about sea-life and a plea to keep it clean and safe for these creatures who are at our mercy. I enjoyed your unique rhyme scheme June and your perfect flow, a joy to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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A fine poem about sea-life and a plea to keep it clean and safe for these creatures who are at our mercy. I enjoyed your unique rhyme scheme June and your perfect flow, a joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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I?m glad this poem resonated with you. Always appreciate your feedback.
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent trichain, June. Such an appropriate social commentary of the delicate ecosystems of the Great Barrier Reef that will be irretrievably damaged if man doesn't make a few necessary changes.
Love the metre and rhyme that you have written so well that your poem flows beautifully.
Gloria
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Excellent trichain, June. Such an appropriate social commentary of the delicate ecosystems of the Great Barrier Reef that will be irretrievably damaged if man doesn't make a few necessary changes.
Love the metre and rhyme that you have written so well that your poem flows beautifully.
Gloria
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the positive feedback!
Comment from BethShelby
I really like the flow of this kind of poem. It is the second one with the rhythm pattern that I have read today and I believe it is going to become one of my favorite types. I love this one. I do hope the reef survive. We should all do what we can to make sure that happens.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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I really like the flow of this kind of poem. It is the second one with the rhythm pattern that I have read today and I believe it is going to become one of my favorite types. I love this one. I do hope the reef survive. We should all do what we can to make sure that happens.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you for sharing your lovely insights.
Comment from Aussie
June, you will be pleased to know that the coral on the Great Barrier Reef is coming back and growing again. The Crown of thorns has been killed off by divers. It still creeps, not so bad now. Loved your poem my friend.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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June, you will be pleased to know that the coral on the Great Barrier Reef is coming back and growing again. The Crown of thorns has been killed off by divers. It still creeps, not so bad now. Loved your poem my friend.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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So glad this poem resonated with you. And thanks for the update on the reef. Much appreciated.
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It's good news for the reef and tourism. Have a good evening? :-)
Comment from ameen786
Outstanding poem with a beautiful theme in simple wordings phrased into meaningful verses and excellent rhymes; flow is superb; picture perfect; the last stanza got the sixth star; thanks for the treat.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Outstanding poem with a beautiful theme in simple wordings phrased into meaningful verses and excellent rhymes; flow is superb; picture perfect; the last stanza got the sixth star; thanks for the treat.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for sharing your insights. And for the generous rating!
Comment from Teri7
June, This is a very beautiful and very well written Trichain poem you have penned for the potlatch poetry event. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love, Teri
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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June, This is a very beautiful and very well written Trichain poem you have penned for the potlatch poetry event. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love, Teri
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much! I appreciate the positive feedback and generous rating!
Comment from royowen
Yes, in many ways the Great Barrier Reef is not faring so we with the bleaching of the coral, and one of the starfish inhabitants wreaking a little havoc of its own, one of the natural wonders may not survive, a beautifully written Trochain poem is so skilfully written June, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Yes, in many ways the Great Barrier Reef is not faring so we with the bleaching of the coral, and one of the starfish inhabitants wreaking a little havoc of its own, one of the natural wonders may not survive, a beautifully written Trochain poem is so skilfully written June, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the positive feedback!
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Most welcome
