Forever Forward
The spark is always there... reach in and grab hold!23 total reviews
Comment from RShipp
"Troubled din" and "fuels dreams" are two word combinations with very powerful pictures!
Best of luck in the 2-4-6 Poem writing prompt contest.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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"Troubled din" and "fuels dreams" are two word combinations with very powerful pictures!
Best of luck in the 2-4-6 Poem writing prompt contest.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Your comments are so very appreciated.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem makes use of powerful words to convey the wonderful message that hope can overwhelm chaos and doubt to allow for dreams. Reason for 4: According to howmanysyllables.com and dictionary.com, "fuels" is two syllables--making your count 2-4-7.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Your poem makes use of powerful words to convey the wonderful message that hope can overwhelm chaos and doubt to allow for dreams. Reason for 4: According to howmanysyllables.com and dictionary.com, "fuels" is two syllables--making your count 2-4-7.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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According to these sources, it is one:
http://www.syllablecount.com/syllables/fuel
https://www.silabas.net/index-en.php?p=fuel
https://www.poetrysoup.com/syllables/fuel
Thank you for your review.
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I'll change the rating to a 5.
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Thank you so much, Janice -- think the only place I can think of where it sounds like 2 syllables is in the Christmas song 'Good King Wenceslas' when he's 'gathering winter's fuel' - LOL! Take care and have a great weekend!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Forever Forward
Hello, anonymous,
Nice entry for the 2-4-6 Poem writing prompt contest. Beautiful presentation. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Good flow.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Forever Forward
Hello, anonymous,
Nice entry for the 2-4-6 Poem writing prompt contest. Beautiful presentation. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Good flow.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Your comments are so appreciated. Thanks.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-4-6, Forever Forward, has the right set up and reminds the reader to always press on because the past has no future and the present cannot last.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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This 2-4-6, Forever Forward, has the right set up and reminds the reader to always press on because the past has no future and the present cannot last.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Two thumbs up, Bill -- thanks so much for your insightful review!!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 2-4-6 poem about hope that is always there within us under he bravado where no one else can see it until we have a reason to unveil our superb power disguised as hope.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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A very well-written 2-4-6 poem about hope that is always there within us under he bravado where no one else can see it until we have a reason to unveil our superb power disguised as hope.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Your time and comments are greatly appreciated.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I read this one out aloud and I my tongue just about got around the last line, love the sentiments here and the whole presentation is hopeful, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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I read this one out aloud and I my tongue just about got around the last line, love the sentiments here and the whole presentation is hopeful, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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That means a lot, Dolly, thank you.
Comment from gramalot8
You have written a great poem with a good message, especially with the word limits.
I'm have many times had only hope to hold on to in many circumstances.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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You have written a great poem with a good message, especially with the word limits.
I'm have many times had only hope to hold on to in many circumstances.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Your time and comments are greatly appreciated.
Comment from Edward Escobar
The above poem is absolutely true. I of course having enjoyed how every word joined gave a profound expression of how a hard life can turn one's dream through much hope. Food for thought. Great piece of work.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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The above poem is absolutely true. I of course having enjoyed how every word joined gave a profound expression of how a hard life can turn one's dream through much hope. Food for thought. Great piece of work.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
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Wow, your time and comments are greatly appreciated.
Comment from Ben B.
"Din," that's an uncommon word. I had to look up what it means and I like the way you used it. Don't forget to capitalize the word "Life's" as it is the beginning word in the line.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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"Din," that's an uncommon word. I had to look up what it means and I like the way you used it. Don't forget to capitalize the word "Life's" as it is the beginning word in the line.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Your review is greatly appreciated.
Comment from Eternal Muse
Absolutely love this entry. Your lines rhyme beautifully Your artistic presentation and artwork are amazing. I think this will do extremely well in the contest and I want to wish you luck in the booths.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Absolutely love this entry. Your lines rhyme beautifully Your artistic presentation and artwork are amazing. I think this will do extremely well in the contest and I want to wish you luck in the booths.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Wow, your time and comments are so very appreciated.
