Forever Forward
The spark is always there... reach in and grab hold!23 total reviews
Comment from ameen786
The light within is the source of humanity's hope; my friend, only you have that extraordinary talent to create the maximum impact using few words; once again, I am disappointed that this brilliant poem should have topped the contest; please take care.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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The light within is the source of humanity's hope; my friend, only you have that extraordinary talent to create the maximum impact using few words; once again, I am disappointed that this brilliant poem should have topped the contest; please take care.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Well, I'm definitely smiling over here, ameen: what a wonderful review and such a star-filled display! I am so very glad you enjoyed this one and THANK YOU for your encouraging comments... definitely a sunny spot in my day! And's sending you some starshine for your week ahead - take care of you out there!! ;) :) Yvette
Comment from royowen
Oh yes indeed,I'm amazed at how many dreams have released into life have come and gone, but I still retain The important ones, adrenaline means a hope for the future, bless you great post, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Oh yes indeed,I'm amazed at how many dreams have released into life have come and gone, but I still retain The important ones, adrenaline means a hope for the future, bless you great post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much, Roy!!
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Bless you
Comment from mermaids
You have a smooth flow of rhyming words that makes this poem fun to read out loud. I like the words din and begin, they have an almost musical flow. Excellent use of words.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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You have a smooth flow of rhyming words that makes this poem fun to read out loud. I like the words din and begin, they have an almost musical flow. Excellent use of words.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Your comments are so very appreciated - thank you.
Comment from victor 66
Sincerely, how does anyone survive without having the feeling of hope? The world is in constant flux, and I think we are just starting to understand that. At least, some of us are. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Sincerely, how does anyone survive without having the feeling of hope? The world is in constant flux, and I think we are just starting to understand that. At least, some of us are. Best wishes.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Your comments are so very appreciated - thank you.
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As always, you are welcome and it was my pleasure.
Comment from jaded831
Beautiful, when faced with a problem imagination is fueled and dreams are born. Our inner spirit soars in times like these. Your picture compliments your words beautifully. You should do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Beautiful, when faced with a problem imagination is fueled and dreams are born. Our inner spirit soars in times like these. Your picture compliments your words beautifully. You should do well in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Your comments are so appreciated - thank you.
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
WRITER, YOU are indeed a magician with words. You make words take on a deeper meaning with so few of them to work with. With EACH syllable you created a womb to nurture and give birth to the title you created. You are indeed a MASTER POET. I love your style.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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WRITER, YOU are indeed a magician with words. You make words take on a deeper meaning with so few of them to work with. With EACH syllable you created a womb to nurture and give birth to the title you created. You are indeed a MASTER POET. I love your style.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Oh, Mary, you've made me smile! Your comments are so appreciated - thank you.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a great entry for the 2-4-6 poetry writing prompt. This truth is right on the mark. I sure hope it does well in the contest! Good luck!
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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This is a great entry for the 2-4-6 poetry writing prompt. This truth is right on the mark. I sure hope it does well in the contest! Good luck!
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Your comments are so appreciated - thank you.
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You're very welcome!
Comment from Liz O'Neill
The message here is similar to light just one little candle. Hopehides in the darkness until someone calls upon it. Then it is there for us to realize our dreams. A nice note of hope. .
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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The message here is similar to light just one little candle. Hopehides in the darkness until someone calls upon it. Then it is there for us to realize our dreams. A nice note of hope. .
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Your comments are so appreciated - thank you.
Comment from lyenochka
What a great way to accomplish this 2-4-6 rhyming poem with rhymes like "within, din, begin." The importance of Hope is a perfect message for today's noisy world. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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What a great way to accomplish this 2-4-6 rhyming poem with rhymes like "within, din, begin." The importance of Hope is a perfect message for today's noisy world. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Your comments are so appreciated - thank you.
Comment from angel123
I really like your 2-4-6 poem. It is cleverly written and it flows with vivid imagination. Your artwork choice is excellent and it enhances your message.
Best wishes!
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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I really like your 2-4-6 poem. It is cleverly written and it flows with vivid imagination. Your artwork choice is excellent and it enhances your message.
Best wishes!
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Oh, angel, you have started the day off with a smile over here -- thank you so much for your lovely comments and those bright stars!! Here's wishing you a spectacular weekend out there!
