Fellow Traveller
What would happen ? Fiction6 total reviews
Comment from Beverly A McBride
I like this story! I have this fantasy that there's FS writers and photographers all over the place and they're out there doing just what I'm doing. I think being involved on here is pretty all encompassing, and time consuming. I'd like to meet more of us. I like the idea of even meeting and still wondering which anonymous reviewer/writer we are engaging at any point. Good luck with your story and the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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I like this story! I have this fantasy that there's FS writers and photographers all over the place and they're out there doing just what I'm doing. I think being involved on here is pretty all encompassing, and time consuming. I'd like to meet more of us. I like the idea of even meeting and still wondering which anonymous reviewer/writer we are engaging at any point. Good luck with your story and the contest.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Thanks for a very interesting review zanya
Comment from RShipp
"A train station could be a writer's paradise." Amazing, the places that we find and hone-in-on our great characters.
Enjoyed the read.
Best of luck in the 'What Would Happen?' contest.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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"A train station could be a writer's paradise." Amazing, the places that we find and hone-in-on our great characters.
Enjoyed the read.
Best of luck in the 'What Would Happen?' contest.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Thanks for reading and sharing zanya
Comment from AJ McCall
This was so sweet. I loved the description of the fellow fanstorian your main character met. This is wonderful contest entry. This is actually making me want to meet you! lol! Thanx for sharing this awesome piece! I wish I had six stars for it...
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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This was so sweet. I loved the description of the fellow fanstorian your main character met. This is wonderful contest entry. This is actually making me want to meet you! lol! Thanx for sharing this awesome piece! I wish I had six stars for it...
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Who can tell where a Fanstorian is to be found ! thanks for sharing zanya
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ha! Yes! You're welcome!
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Very Good! Yes, that would be an experience. I feel so close to a lot of my associate authors, but I don't know what it would feel like to actually meet one of you. We'd have a lot in common, this I know. Well written story of a chance meeting with a Fanstorian.
NB:We bought smiled conspiratorially...I think you mean "We both smiled"
Ralf
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Very Good! Yes, that would be an experience. I feel so close to a lot of my associate authors, but I don't know what it would feel like to actually meet one of you. We'd have a lot in common, this I know. Well written story of a chance meeting with a Fanstorian.
NB:We bought smiled conspiratorially...I think you mean "We both smiled"
Ralf
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Thanks for sharing and pointing out the SPAG ! Zanya
Comment from lyenochka
You posted an intriguing possibility. I've also wondered if I could recognize another Fanstorian if I met one in person. Great job with a complete plot with climax and even character change from the privacy desired to actually making a connection.
Suggestions:
How do you know,' (question mark)
Ever heard of these guys, Fanstory,' (question mark)
suitable sartori for my
(satori)
Sonnet's man (sonnet) feels somehow that the sonnet is an adjective not a possessive here.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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You posted an intriguing possibility. I've also wondered if I could recognize another Fanstorian if I met one in person. Great job with a complete plot with climax and even character change from the privacy desired to actually making a connection.
Suggestions:
How do you know,' (question mark)
Ever heard of these guys, Fanstory,' (question mark)
suitable sartori for my
(satori)
Sonnet's man (sonnet) feels somehow that the sonnet is an adjective not a possessive here.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Great review & thanks for SPAGS spotting !zanya
Comment from BethShelby
I guess it would be interesting to actually meet one in the flesh, but I maybe remaining anonymous has it's advantage. It is kind of like listening to someone on the radio and creating a mental picture of what they look like. Then we actually meet them and our mental image is shattered. Their voice never sounds the same again. Nice entry for the What would happen contest.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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I guess it would be interesting to actually meet one in the flesh, but I maybe remaining anonymous has it's advantage. It is kind of like listening to someone on the radio and creating a mental picture of what they look like. Then we actually meet them and our mental image is shattered. Their voice never sounds the same again. Nice entry for the What would happen contest.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Thanks for reading and sharing zanya
