Can You Pass the Ketchup, Please
My Life As A Gluttojn40 total reviews
Comment from Frederick Samson
I appreciate your humour and so on but honestly mate how can this be granted as 6 stars and the poems I've wrote not be. I hope it's just this site that is insane and not the entire poetry community. Ffs
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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I appreciate your humour and so on but honestly mate how can this be granted as 6 stars and the poems I've wrote not be. I hope it's just this site that is insane and not the entire poetry community. Ffs
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Could you clarify why you gave it a four star rating. Your review makes it look like you only want to drag down my average. Which is reportable.
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Excuse me, I couldn?t care less about your average, I don?t want to be rude but I found it remedial. I honestly appreciate a review you gave me, I think it was five star, I really do appreciate it and the only indication it had on my review of your poem was to give it a 4 instead of a 2/3. If that?s reportable then I suppose you are correct. I do deserve to be reported. How for a second can you consider your words worthy of more than a four, especially to the level of denial. I?m an intelligent lad, trust me, so I?m going to step back and make myself able and willing to try understand the fact I am missing something. Without contempt, humour me, explain how your poem is of any great meaning and show me how it manages to entwine with the readers inner soul ??
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How about this. Don?t review any more of my work. If you?re so intelligent then I would have thought you could have figured out I wrote this as a joke. I?m not a poet, I don?t write stuff to entwine people?s souls I do it to make them laugh. If I see one I don?t like I keep scrolling instead of imposing my values on them. Don?t review me anymore and I?ll do the same for your stuff.
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Yeah I took it as a joke, are you deluded, how can you not think a 4 star rating is a generous rating. Idiot
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I actually ketchup aswel, so I was already bias towards the words you wrote but still felt a 4 was being extremely nice. Crank
Comment from ElPoetry001
Wise persons make decisions that will not harm themselves, or others.
If a person challenges the body and discards health warnings the body fails. It cannot be measured by what David Cluckhead (chicken) looks like.
Some people are trying hard, some people do not care if they look like lard.
"Well, Billy has bad teeth..."
Not comparable.
Stay well.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Wise persons make decisions that will not harm themselves, or others.
If a person challenges the body and discards health warnings the body fails. It cannot be measured by what David Cluckhead (chicken) looks like.
Some people are trying hard, some people do not care if they look like lard.
"Well, Billy has bad teeth..."
Not comparable.
Stay well.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
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Stay well
Comment from nomi338
Exactly. As everyone should and undoubtedly does know, ugly is as ugly does. Anyone so crass as to criticize anyone fighting the battle of the bulge is acting ugly and should be ashamed of themselves. You know who you are.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Exactly. As everyone should and undoubtedly does know, ugly is as ugly does. Anyone so crass as to criticize anyone fighting the battle of the bulge is acting ugly and should be ashamed of themselves. You know who you are.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from elchupakabra
This piece is well done, it is clean with a nice rhyme scheme and it is rather amusing (as long as one is not partaking as well). Great work, thanks for sharing, good luck in the contest. Later daze.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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This piece is well done, it is clean with a nice rhyme scheme and it is rather amusing (as long as one is not partaking as well). Great work, thanks for sharing, good luck in the contest. Later daze.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
I like your flipant verse. You may not be a poet, but, you did alright here.
I love your last tw stanzas...
There's no debate,
I can lose weight,
Then I say smugly,
You'll always be ugly.
Ralf
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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I like your flipant verse. You may not be a poet, but, you did alright here.
I love your last tw stanzas...
There's no debate,
I can lose weight,
Then I say smugly,
You'll always be ugly.
Ralf
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much Ralf. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That is really good! I love the reply at the end. Gluttony is a sin many people have, and others would like the chance to have. Your couplets were fun, and well written. Well done, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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That is really good! I love the reply at the end. Gluttony is a sin many people have, and others would like the chance to have. Your couplets were fun, and well written. Well done, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much Sandra. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Raul1
Interesting poem on poking fun at some people who eat too much. I found this humorous and the picture is hilarious. Good luck in the contest! A fun poem I've read.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Interesting poem on poking fun at some people who eat too much. I found this humorous and the picture is hilarious. Good luck in the contest! A fun poem I've read.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from mermaids
This is a humorous poem and makes fun of indulging in high caloric foods. Your two lines verses are smooth and capture well the image of gluttony. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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This is a humorous poem and makes fun of indulging in high caloric foods. Your two lines verses are smooth and capture well the image of gluttony. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from gramalot8
I love this. Your descriptive language really brings everything visible to your readers.
And I absolutely love the ending. So true! Thanks for sharing this with us and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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I love this. Your descriptive language really brings everything visible to your readers.
And I absolutely love the ending. So true! Thanks for sharing this with us and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from ameen786
Great job my friend and you got a winner in this one; short and meaningful verses in excellent ryhmes and flows faster than ketchup; good luck!
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Great job my friend and you got a winner in this one; short and meaningful verses in excellent ryhmes and flows faster than ketchup; good luck!
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
