My Wish
Something Begins10 total reviews
Comment from Mia Twysted
A wonderful piece that speaks from one heart to another. It shows he love can change a person making them better and stronger than they were before.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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A wonderful piece that speaks from one heart to another. It shows he love can change a person making them better and stronger than they were before.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem, and for this great review. :)
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the Repetition Poetry contest. This is revealing, and it should do well. I wish you the best of luck!
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the Repetition Poetry contest. This is revealing, and it should do well. I wish you the best of luck!
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for this great review.
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You're very welcome!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written repetition poem about finding the perfect mate and that the can show one another how much they fitting each other. Two people who are meant for each other cannot be seperated.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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A very well-written repetition poem about finding the perfect mate and that the can show one another how much they fitting each other. Two people who are meant for each other cannot be seperated.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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I believe in soulmates and this is what this is about. Thank you so much for reading.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Great job with the entry for the Repetition writing prompt contest. Nice imagery. You repeated one line in each stanza as the rules requires. Nice presentation. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Great job with the entry for the Repetition writing prompt contest. Nice imagery. You repeated one line in each stanza as the rules requires. Nice presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Thank you for this nice review. :)
Comment from Jacob David Collins
This is a well written poem about a person's love for their partner. You can see just how they feel and how important to them it is that their soulmate knows that. A well written piece, I enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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This is a well written poem about a person's love for their partner. You can see just how they feel and how important to them it is that their soulmate knows that. A well written piece, I enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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Thank you reading my poem and for this nice review. :)
Comment from A Little Bird
Congratulations on this lovely piece. The image you've selected complements your poem well. Stay healthy and safe during this depressing pandemic! Good luck with the competition!
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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Congratulations on this lovely piece. The image you've selected complements your poem well. Stay healthy and safe during this depressing pandemic! Good luck with the competition!
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem, you and your family stay safe as well.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I think our body language gives away our true feelings about someone and how we feel, we show our love and our trust in actions and behaviour. A fine loving write with a poignant repeated line, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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I think our body language gives away our true feelings about someone and how we feel, we show our love and our trust in actions and behaviour. A fine loving write with a poignant repeated line, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for this nice review.
Comment from equestrik
This is a poem professing great love and appreciation for someone. I fear that it also expresses that the writer feels they are nothing on their own and need the other's love in order to be somebody.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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This is a poem professing great love and appreciation for someone. I fear that it also expresses that the writer feels they are nothing on their own and need the other's love in order to be somebody.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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Not at all. It's a poem about two soulmates who complete each other. Thank you for reading.
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:)
Comment from AprilViolet
I cant believe this poem doesn't have more reviews! It is simply delightful! I really enjoy love poems like this one. And the picture you chose is gorgeous! Well done Boogienights!
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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I cant believe this poem doesn't have more reviews! It is simply delightful! I really enjoy love poems like this one. And the picture you chose is gorgeous! Well done Boogienights!
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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Thank you for this wonderful review....:)
Comment from WriterHeather
This is a very beautiful poem you have written for the repetition contest. The love you have written about is so passionate. I love the presentation and I think this will do very well in the contest! Good luck!
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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This is a very beautiful poem you have written for the repetition contest. The love you have written about is so passionate. I love the presentation and I think this will do very well in the contest! Good luck!
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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Thank you, you are great.
