Comment from cdefan

Excellent

Great chapter! Full of emotion and heartfelt scenes. I hope Tessa survives. Looking forward to part 2! Hopefully it will end happy. Knowing your writing, it will.

The artwork is really nice. It popped out.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020

Thank you, cdefan :)

So thrilled you enjoyed the chapter although it was sad. Glad you mentioned the artwork. You're the second person that like it. I thought they looked a little like my 2 characters.

Stay tuned for part two my friend! Thanks for your support!
Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

Your marvellous episode reminded me after our two girls were born, the fact that I was a father, overwhelmed me, I felt so underserving, so incapable, so honoured to have this image of perfection before, but never more sure, I was going to be the best father I could be, now Elaine and I are grandparents. Beautifully written. Blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020

Thank you, my dear friend :)

I'm so happy this brought memories of your daughter's birth. I think we all feel like we are undeserving and anxious about becoming a parent. When Nathan was born, I had postpartum blues for a week. I was young and really didn't know how to except motherhood. But, it snapped in as soon as I was home from the hospital. I was like a mamma dog, protecting her baby. :)
Thanks for all your great feedback, Roy.

Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 20-Aug-2020

I know what?s it?s like, but a papa dog

Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

I'm so glad the babies are alright. Was a little worried when the second baby wasn't making a sound. I do hope they're able to stop Tesse's bleeding. Your chapter is well-written, interesting, believable start to finish. As always, I look forward to reading more.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020

Thank you, Mistydawn :)

You know me... I can't let anything bad happen to my main characters. Yes, they get in sticky situations, but in the end, everything is a fairy tale. Stay tuned my friend, more about Tessa next week.

Thanks so much!
Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Fantastic! I like and have enjoyed the short, simple and symphonic chapter, the free flow of thoughts, balanced plot development; realistic and contributory dialogues; curious ending; well said; well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020

Thank you, Alcreator Litt Dear :)

So glad to hear from you. I appreciate the great feedback and support. Stay safe and hope to hear back from you.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from fm wright

Exceptional

First of all, fantastic choice of artwork. What stood out to me most was the emotional settings each of your characters revealed. Also, the story line flowed quite smoothly. Your hanging ending has me eagerly anticipating your next posting.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020

Thank you, Faye :)

I'm glad you liked the artwork. The pictures reminded me of Tessa and Jace.
I was hoping to bring out Jace's emotions as he became a father. His twin brother was important in this scene. He was Jace's savior during a major crisis.
Thanks for all your awesome feedback and support. More about Tessa next week.

Stay safe my friend!
Hugs,
Shana :)

reply by fm wright on 20-Aug-2020

Can hardly wait until your next posting.
Have a great rest of week.
Hugs,
Faye

Comment from ngage

Excellent

Great chapter, Ms. Shana. The emotion in the story is believable and realistic. You brought your characters to life with a sea of emotions. Praying for Tessa.

Nate

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020

Thanks Nate :)

So thrilled to hear your feedback. You always put a smile on my face. Thanks for supporting me! More about Tessa next week!

Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Good

Two babies to continue the line, two babies to discover the world through the eyes of their parents, but also from their own experiences. Let's hope Tess will be safe and teach them honor and justice. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020

Thank you, Iza :)

This was an emotional scene for me. I was hoping to give the reader my character's bond for one another, especially Jace and Jem.

Sincerely,
Shana :)