Comment from CharR

Excellent

Wow, you used a nice, bright background to get our attention. I am a big daisy fan, love the imagery of smiling at the sun. Good luck to you in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.

Excellent

This is a fine thought for the 10 Word Poem entry. Sometime short thoughts can really hit the spot, touch our heart, and even be encouraging. Well done!

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020

Thanks a lot for your review.

reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 18-Aug-2020

You're welcome.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, anonymous,

Wonderful entry for the 10 Word Poem writing prompt contest. Good word count and connection between lines that helps the flow. Good luck in the contest. Walking in a field of daisies sound great just about now.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020

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Comment from victor 66

Excellent

We sometimes forget that during a crisis, simple things and perhaps the beautiful things, are still in our lives. We in the United States, have been secluded and sheltered in many respects, compared to other countries throughout the world. The daisies and the sun are still there to enjoy, so we are very lucky. Best luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020

Thanks for your review. Sometimes we just need to stop and smell the daisies

reply by victor 66 on 17-Aug-2020

You are most welcome and it was my pleasure, mystery writer.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent poem and a pleasant walk.
The world could use some daisy smiles these days.
Excellent picture and color choices.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020

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Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice image and
sunny presentation.
-You have used your
ten words well.
-Effective imagery
and alliteration.
-I like the formatting of
your poem and the two
sections about the daisies
and then smiling at the sun!
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

reply by Pam (respa) on 16-Aug-2020

You are welcome.

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

This poem meets the requirements for the contest. I like the originality of your piece of poetry. It is set perfect along with the picture. Excellent work! Good luck on the contest!

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020

Thanks for your review.

Comment from Kermit R. Mullins

Excellent

Best wishes and best of luck with your "10 Word Poem" entry. 10 words is correct. The artwork compliments your word choice. Now I need to go for a walk in the sun, if I could find any sun. Best regards.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020

Thanks for your review. Sun is hard to find nowadays ;)

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

Your words make me feel good, I would like to walk in a huge field of daisies. Your poem takes the reader to another place, one of beauty. I like the image of daisies smiling at the sun.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020

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Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hello Mystery Writer!
Oh! You've got that right! How could anyone walk in a field of daisies and NOT smile? My kind of walk, for certain. I have hundreds of daisies blooming in my gardens as I write. Love them dearly ... just wish their fragrance was sweeter!
Thank you for sharing!

diane

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020

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