Stealthy Footsteps
Senryu 4/7/416 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing all of this detail about the Bengal tiger in this 4-7-4 senryu. The red accents are very dramatic. I did not realize there are so many of the creatures in captivity. Sighs- Joan
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thank you for sharing all of this detail about the Bengal tiger in this 4-7-4 senryu. The red accents are very dramatic. I did not realize there are so many of the creatures in captivity. Sighs- Joan
Comment Written 15-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and valuable feedback. It's so good to hear from you :)
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from karenina
Is that a Lotus Blossom? (Can you tell I have a brown thumb?)---if so what a clever juxtaposition of the sheer muscular strength of the tiger and the spiritual centeredness of the lotus...and yet both hold power and ignite the imagination! Nice!--Karenina
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Is that a Lotus Blossom? (Can you tell I have a brown thumb?)---if so what a clever juxtaposition of the sheer muscular strength of the tiger and the spiritual centeredness of the lotus...and yet both hold power and ignite the imagination! Nice!--Karenina
Comment Written 15-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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I have a feeling I already answered this review...weird. a bunch of my reviews are doubled. Anyway, thank you very much for your review and kind words, Karenina.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great presentation, Gypsy. I like the color scheme, the image, the notes within the poem, and your great message. It all works together to create a great poem.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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This is a great presentation, Gypsy. I like the color scheme, the image, the notes within the poem, and your great message. It all works together to create a great poem.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much, Jan. You are very kind to take the time to read my poem.
hugs,
gypsy
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This surprising piece is thought-provoking and skillfully-conceived. The reader--this one, anyway!--thought the tiger was about to have supper, but--NO!
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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This surprising piece is thought-provoking and skillfully-conceived. The reader--this one, anyway!--thought the tiger was about to have supper, but--NO!
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Have a great weekend,
Gypsy
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy--and it points out once again man's propensity for greed. It's sickening what we do to nature in the name of 'having a good and relaxing time'
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Another fine poem, Gypsy--and it points out once again man's propensity for greed. It's sickening what we do to nature in the name of 'having a good and relaxing time'
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much, Mike. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. :)
hugs,
gypsy
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Senryu about the unique Bengal tigers. I love to look at them and if I would have an opportunity I would like to capture then on camera as my trophy.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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A very well-written Senryu about the unique Bengal tigers. I love to look at them and if I would have an opportunity I would like to capture then on camera as my trophy.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. May you have a peaceful day.
Hugs, Gypsy
Comment from June Sargent
It is an abomination when it comes to poaching! And it is especially heinous when it comes to profiting off their lovely skins. This poem is powerful in its simplicity. And I love the artwork. Thank you highlighting this issue that should not be ignored.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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It is an abomination when it comes to poaching! And it is especially heinous when it comes to profiting off their lovely skins. This poem is powerful in its simplicity. And I love the artwork. Thank you highlighting this issue that should not be ignored.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much for your excellent, review, six stars, and kind words. May you have a peaceful day.
Hugs, Gypsy
Comment from Bobby Cunningham
Nice going Gypsy. This is an exceptional little poem that you penned here and your presentation is absolutely exquisite. My first time reading a 4-7-4. Really very nice work.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Nice going Gypsy. This is an exceptional little poem that you penned here and your presentation is absolutely exquisite. My first time reading a 4-7-4. Really very nice work.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Thank you both very much for your excellent review and kind words. Thank you for the six stars! May you have a peaceful day.
Hugs, Gypsy
Comment from royowen
They are such magnificent animals, it would be such a pity if they were to vanish from the earth completely, and they are the only ones either. Beautifully written, Gypsy, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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They are such magnificent animals, it would be such a pity if they were to vanish from the earth completely, and they are the only ones either. Beautifully written, Gypsy, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. May you have a peaceful day.
Hugs, Gypsy
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You too Gypsy,
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A silent scary presentation of the prowl and the hunt and the final capture, an atmospheric write well presented and much enjoyed, a shiver of fear went down my spine here as I read your words, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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A silent scary presentation of the prowl and the hunt and the final capture, an atmospheric write well presented and much enjoyed, a shiver of fear went down my spine here as I read your words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. May you have a peaceful day.
Hugs, Gypsy
