A Passing Shower
5-7-5 set in a garden...15 total reviews
Comment from QC Poet
Smooth Flowing blends nicely well thought out expressive positive messaging perfectly described the accompanying photo included with your posting and Good Luck in the 5-7-5 poem contest,
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Smooth Flowing blends nicely well thought out expressive positive messaging perfectly described the accompanying photo included with your posting and Good Luck in the 5-7-5 poem contest,
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
Comment from lightink
This poem has a romantic and slightly impressionistic feel to it - with the blurred hues! I enjoyed the the rhyme and the rich wording!
Thank you for sharing!
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This poem has a romantic and slightly impressionistic feel to it - with the blurred hues! I enjoyed the the rhyme and the rich wording!
Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This is a very beautiful poem. You applied human actions like "Kiss", "Brush" to nature. What a accurate description for the art.
Well done. I love it.
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This is a very beautiful poem. You applied human actions like "Kiss", "Brush" to nature. What a accurate description for the art.
Well done. I love it.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
Comment from kahpot
A beautiful setting your 5-7-5 gives to the reader, though wet you have given the image of warmth and comfort, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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A beautiful setting your 5-7-5 gives to the reader, though wet you have given the image of warmth and comfort, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
Comment from royowen
What an excellent post, all those metaphorical words that point out perfectly the visual, the sounds of the weather that projects such great imagery, well done, good luck, Blessings Roy
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What an excellent post, all those metaphorical words that point out perfectly the visual, the sounds of the weather that projects such great imagery, well done, good luck, Blessings Roy
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Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
