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Knowledge

Poem 5/7/5

3 total reviews 
Comment from J. Dennis
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It is how a concept is written or read that reveals much. I would like to see the knowledge survive. But the point you bring out is clear. You put a lot of thought in this. Nice job. Good luck.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
    Thanks for a great review zanya
reply by J. Dennis on 16-Aug-2020
    I would hope that books would be taken care of instead of ruined or burned. It is good that one can keep knowledge in his/her mind.
reply by J. Dennis on 19-Aug-2020
    Nations or empires are made with the way they treat knowledge. You lose it, you do not survive. That is drastic but look at the Greeks and Romans.
Comment from lightink
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Thought provoking 5-7-5 poem...sadly, this double-edged sword situation is true for so many things (and always was). Our voice can build, teach or hurt....
Thank you for sharing this!

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
    Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya
Comment from kahpot
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What an excellent question, yes it is hard to figure out if early writings are used to raise violence, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
    Yes indeed -thanks for reading and sharing zanya