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Lamentations of a Lost Laddy

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My Autobiography

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Comment from Liz O'Neill
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I've read most of Thomas Merton's books. He is so basic and down to earth. This line makes me laugh: " it is usually a bunch of relapsing idiots." Where I worked, I heard addicts and alcoholics say, "I don't belong here with these people. I'm not like them. I'm unique." Enter Step 1... I just stepped out to read your poem. It is brilliant.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much you are abused had dad kercher and Life to my narrative.

    Warmly,
    Darren
reply by Liz O'Neill on 03-Jan-2021
    Thank you
Comment from irishauthorme
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Thi is more than a biography, it is a confession of following a stray path, being lost on that path and having nothing but personal faith to sustain you while you seek the directions to the good path.
You have had some remarkable friends along the way, some terrible people infringing on your sanity, and a lot of help from various organizations that helped you survive.
I personally believe that when you do the right things for yourself, good things happen to and around you, something akin to echoes from the Great Beyond. We all have our struggles just making it through this layered, complicated life, and temptations abound for us top turn away from the true life we really desire, and take the wrong path to momentary pleasure and false fulfillment. Satan, whispering, cajoling, Evil!
The strength is in you to follow your own true meaning in life.
Be true to yourself!
irish

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
    Irish, you have extrapolated on this in a wonderful fashion helping me to perceive not only how the reader is perceiving this but helping me to decide how to proceed. I am a gyroscopic yo-yo high highs and low lows but as God is my gyroscope and keeps me on the right path even when I'm on the wrong path.

    Blessings,

    Brother Badger Cull

    Darren
Comment from lyenochka
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Thanks for sharing, Darren. You've had quite the life and met some more than interesting people. God was with you and provided all along. Praise Jesus! I think you might want to post shorter posts in the future, maybe combine short part like your hospital experience and the poem you wrote then. That might be a good post for Fanstory.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
    thanks I love your advice and as always I am very grateful for any tips and tricks you have. You have written very sensitive about a wide variety of projects and I treasure your reviews.