A Fruitful Encounter
Poem about faith in a stacked 5-7-5 suite.13 total reviews
Comment from Mia Twysted
I have the understanding that I am stiff and confined into a space to small to let in light. It gives the impression of a fight to reclaim that which makes you shine. And you did in the end find a way to shine.
However, I did stumble a bit as I read through the piece aloud.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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I have the understanding that I am stiff and confined into a space to small to let in light. It gives the impression of a fight to reclaim that which makes you shine. And you did in the end find a way to shine.
However, I did stumble a bit as I read through the piece aloud.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your review. Your comments are appreciated.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Beautiful entry for the
Stacked 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. It flows well. The metaphor and imagery is very good. I like the spiritual topic.
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Hello, anonymous,
Beautiful entry for the
Stacked 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. It flows well. The metaphor and imagery is very good. I like the spiritual topic.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is really good work. I love the message of faith conveyed here using the plants and seeds flourishing in impossible conditions. I enjoyed reading this inspirational, uplifting, and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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This is really good work. I love the message of faith conveyed here using the plants and seeds flourishing in impossible conditions. I enjoyed reading this inspirational, uplifting, and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Thanks Jeffrey! You made my day with your complimentary review.
Comment from RShipp
My favorite stanza:
Now on fertile ground,
a runner bean flourishing,
I've outstripped my past.
You have meet the requirements of this contest: Write a poem that has multiple stanzas. Each stanza is 5-7-5.
Best of luck in the Stacked 5-7-5 writing prompt contest.
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My favorite stanza:
Now on fertile ground,
a runner bean flourishing,
I've outstripped my past.
You have meet the requirements of this contest: Write a poem that has multiple stanzas. Each stanza is 5-7-5.
Best of luck in the Stacked 5-7-5 writing prompt contest.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is much pain and emotion in these words as we are crushed by verbal or physical abuse in a relationship and the fight begins to have some self worth and here you succeeded as the seed was sewn and it blossomed, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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There is much pain and emotion in these words as we are crushed by verbal or physical abuse in a relationship and the fight begins to have some self worth and here you succeeded as the seed was sewn and it blossomed, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written stacked 5-7-5 poem about a future we can see for ourselves how we can once again flourish when we break through the hard surface placed around us to keep us from growing.
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A very well-written stacked 5-7-5 poem about a future we can see for ourselves how we can once again flourish when we break through the hard surface placed around us to keep us from growing.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent work, I think the things that have gone before me are my teachers now. This is a marvellous entry in this poetic contest, with some excellent moments and great thrill to me personally, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy,
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This is an excellent work, I think the things that have gone before me are my teachers now. This is a marvellous entry in this poetic contest, with some excellent moments and great thrill to me personally, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy,
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
Comment from TommyWrites
"In His safe arbour,,
'midst a forever of friendship,
each shoot can stand tall,"
I love that part right there. It's so deep, yet comes across as light. When I read that, I think of all the space God gives us to grow, and yet He is there, guiding us in the direction of the sun. So we can stand tall, strong, etc. Your whole 5-7-5 is very good, and I liked it a lot.
I think you have a good chance in the contest!
TommyWrites~
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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"In His safe arbour,,
'midst a forever of friendship,
each shoot can stand tall,"
I love that part right there. It's so deep, yet comes across as light. When I read that, I think of all the space God gives us to grow, and yet He is there, guiding us in the direction of the sun. So we can stand tall, strong, etc. Your whole 5-7-5 is very good, and I liked it a lot.
I think you have a good chance in the contest!
TommyWrites~
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your close interpretation and connection with my poem.
Comment from Bill Pinder
I really like this well written poem, and I would give you six stars if I had it. Thanks for sharing your creativity with this important message of our need for healthy love. Bill
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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I really like this well written poem, and I would give you six stars if I had it. Thanks for sharing your creativity with this important message of our need for healthy love. Bill
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your complimentary review. You understood my poem well.
Comment from Margaret Bednar
Wow - that's a lot of discipline and finger counting... and it is well done. A poem that starts out with little hope, ends up triumphing in the end. Great job with this stacked poem!
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Wow - that's a lot of discipline and finger counting... and it is well done. A poem that starts out with little hope, ends up triumphing in the end. Great job with this stacked poem!
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Thanks for reviewing. i got on a roll and kept going. Maybe it's a bit long-winded.
