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Open the Window

What happened when Dad forgot to open the window.

3 total reviews 
Comment from writer723
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This was a very delightful tale of your car-riding experiences. I enjoyed your vivid descriptions. It felt like I was riding in the car with you and your family watching the events unfold. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
    Again, thank you for your encouraging words and the honor of the six star rating. Much appreciated.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Excellent
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The story from memory, about dad's action, is so simply and vividly expressed in right perspective, unforgettable; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
    Thanks for the read and encouraging review.
Comment from equestrik
Excellent
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This is an awesome story. I laughed loudly in the end but had great sympathy for you and your suffering of car sickness as I did as well. Great telling of a hilarious event!

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
    Thanks for the read and encouraging review. I still don't do well in the back seat of cars. Maybe it is all in my head.
reply by equestrik on 12-Aug-2020
    me either!