Feast of the Gods
English Sonnet of the Sea contest entry22 total reviews
Comment from amada
I am not not knowledgedable of the sonnet rhymings. But I was taken by this picture that you created from other Gppg;e pictures. The lines are somewhat tumoultous, but it reflects a vivid imagination.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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I am not not knowledgedable of the sonnet rhymings. But I was taken by this picture that you created from other Gppg;e pictures. The lines are somewhat tumoultous, but it reflects a vivid imagination.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review, Amada. The sonnet is just one of the many poetry forms I like to play with. I love goofing around with my art program when it comes to pictures. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this piece and the artwork. Have yourself a wonderful weekend.
Ron
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Dragon, you should be getting an extra five stars for your construction of your modern Poseidon.
As for your post, I thought the humor well done!
Poseidon may be eating pizza and wearing spandex, but his nature has not changed yet.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Dear Dragon, you should be getting an extra five stars for your construction of your modern Poseidon.
As for your post, I thought the humor well done!
Poseidon may be eating pizza and wearing spandex, but his nature has not changed yet.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the excellent review, Suzanna. I actually like to play with my art program as much as I like playing with words. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and humorous comments. I'm glad you liked this silly piece and my art work. Hope you have a great weekend.
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Ron
Comment from mermaids
Your poem deserves a six because it is the first poem I have ever read where a shark devours a pizza delivery guy. This is hilarious and you have created a mini movie in poetic form. Your rhyming of words adds to the strength of the poem, excellent use of words.
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Your poem deserves a six because it is the first poem I have ever read where a shark devours a pizza delivery guy. This is hilarious and you have created a mini movie in poetic form. Your rhyming of words adds to the strength of the poem, excellent use of words.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Wow, thank you so much for the fantastic review and giant sixer, Mermaids. Yeah, I don't think I've read one where a giant shark eats a delivery boy either. I really appreciate the gracious rating and kind comments. I'm glad you liked this ridiculous piece. I hope you have an awesome weekend and thank you again.
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Ron
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You made me smile with this sonnet and I thought it cleverly and skilfully written and your brought some humour into your story, I reckon this will be a winner for the contest! Never mess with Poseidon! Much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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You made me smile with this sonnet and I thought it cleverly and skilfully written and your brought some humour into your story, I reckon this will be a winner for the contest! Never mess with Poseidon! Much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Dolly. I love adding humorous stuff into these contests. lol I really appreciate the generous stars and kind comments. I'm glad you liked this silly sonnet. I hope you have a wonderful weekend.
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Ron
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This is sure to be a winner Ron! Very inventive x
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Oh, my, this is wickedly amusing. Placing an ancient god on a beach receiving a pizza and arguing with the delivery man--such a clever idea, well executed in a skillfully written sonnet.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Oh, my, this is wickedly amusing. Placing an ancient god on a beach receiving a pizza and arguing with the delivery man--such a clever idea, well executed in a skillfully written sonnet.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review, Janice. Yeah, I like to come up with off the wall stuff here and there. lol I really appreciate the stars and kind comments. I'm glad you liked my silly piece. Thank you again.
Ron
Comment from Cindy Warren
I think I would have let him have is free pizza. I think Poseidon did it on purpose, ordering a pizza to a spot nobody could have delivered to in thirty minutes. What a jerk, but I still would have let him have it. LOL Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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I think I would have let him have is free pizza. I think Poseidon did it on purpose, ordering a pizza to a spot nobody could have delivered to in thirty minutes. What a jerk, but I still would have let him have it. LOL Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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lol Yeah, you're the only one that mentioned that. He knew it would take longer than 30 minutes to get it out to the beach. He gets lots of free pizzas that way. lol Thank you for the great review, Cindy. I really appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked my silly sonnet. Have yourself a wonderful weekend.
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Ron
Comment from oliver818
Ha what an interesting poem. I have to say I quite enjoyed it even though it's a bit odd, it's funny and I can imagine a shark jumping out and eating him as Poseidon's command although I doubt he would hear Poseidon's voice calling to him if a shark was dragging him into the sea. Just my point Of view. Thanks for sharing this
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Ha what an interesting poem. I have to say I quite enjoyed it even though it's a bit odd, it's funny and I can imagine a shark jumping out and eating him as Poseidon's command although I doubt he would hear Poseidon's voice calling to him if a shark was dragging him into the sea. Just my point Of view. Thanks for sharing this
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Yeah, I'm sure he had other things on his mind at the time. lol Thank you for the great review, Oliver. I really appreciate the generous stars friend. I'm glad you liked this ridiculous piece. Have yourself a great weekend.
Ron
Comment from Pantygynt
Yeah! Yo don't mess wid no sea god man. When pzzidon orders pizza he wants dat pizza damn quick or yo won' get no greenbacks huh!
This was great fun, the picture too. They don't make 'em like that any more.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Yeah! Yo don't mess wid no sea god man. When pzzidon orders pizza he wants dat pizza damn quick or yo won' get no greenbacks huh!
This was great fun, the picture too. They don't make 'em like that any more.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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lol Thank you for the hilarious review, Pantygynt. I really appreciate the generous and chuckle. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a good one.
Ron
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written sonnet with a little bit of humor about Poseidon ordering pizza on the beach and refuse to pay the pizza boy and then feeds him to the shark. The artwork is also amazingly done .
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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A very well-written sonnet with a little bit of humor about Poseidon ordering pizza on the beach and refuse to pay the pizza boy and then feeds him to the shark. The artwork is also amazingly done .
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the excellent review, Sandra. The sonnet is my favorite poetry form. I just had to enter this contest with something ridiculous. I also love playing with my art program as much as I do writing. I appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Thank you again.
Ron
Comment from RodG
This certainly is not your everyday sonnet, but it was fun to read. I like the way you characterize Poseidon. I would never have thought of him liking pizza, but I can see how he would be cheap enough to demand a free one when the guy did not turn up on time. And we all know how vindictive he can be! The meter is flawless and your rhyme scheme is perfect. Rod
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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This certainly is not your everyday sonnet, but it was fun to read. I like the way you characterize Poseidon. I would never have thought of him liking pizza, but I can see how he would be cheap enough to demand a free one when the guy did not turn up on time. And we all know how vindictive he can be! The meter is flawless and your rhyme scheme is perfect. Rod
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Rod. Yeah, I always like to try something no one else would think of. I love stepping outside the box. lol I appreciate the generous stars and kind comments, friend. I'm glad you liked my silly offering. Have yourself a great weekend.
Ron
