O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from Wendyanne
This is quite an interesting and thought-provoking haiku AW. I like your use of imagery to describe the thunder and lightning and the silver skies etc. Well done.
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This is quite an interesting and thought-provoking haiku AW. I like your use of imagery to describe the thunder and lightning and the silver skies etc. Well done.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2006
Comment from Kingsland
interesting choice of words you have for this piece of poetry
I have no suggestions for this well written verse
this was my pleasre to read and review... John
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interesting choice of words you have for this piece of poetry
I have no suggestions for this well written verse
this was my pleasre to read and review... John
Comment Written 04-Jun-2006
Comment from Ponder
Hi Alcreator Writer,
Strangely enough, This poem reminds me of summer, the usual time for thunder and lightening in Ireland. Looking out to sea and seeing lightening flash across the silvery sky is one of my childhoos memories.
So thank you for the memory!
Ponder
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Hi Alcreator Writer,
Strangely enough, This poem reminds me of summer, the usual time for thunder and lightening in Ireland. Looking out to sea and seeing lightening flash across the silvery sky is one of my childhoos memories.
So thank you for the memory!
Ponder
Comment Written 03-Jun-2006
Comment from tuskantail
Double meanings I pick up loud and clear. Very well written in hiding this under the guise of nature and the haiku. You are very gifted in your thinking and expression of these thoughts.
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Double meanings I pick up loud and clear. Very well written in hiding this under the guise of nature and the haiku. You are very gifted in your thinking and expression of these thoughts.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2006
Comment from PineBoxPoet
Meaning in so little words. How? I may never know.
Words from a brilliant mind you show.
One day I will learn and this poet will grow.
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Meaning in so little words. How? I may never know.
Words from a brilliant mind you show.
One day I will learn and this poet will grow.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2006
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Another expert haiku! Great job on the format and imagery. This one could mean so much more than just thunder and lightning but since they are only supposed to be about nature, I'll be quiet..lol. Great job done!
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Another expert haiku! Great job on the format and imagery. This one could mean so much more than just thunder and lightning but since they are only supposed to be about nature, I'll be quiet..lol. Great job done!
Comment Written 03-Jun-2006
Comment from Swtdreamz
flash clears dark here, there
thunders shock, show silver sky
choose dark, light or rest! - oo thunder and lightning
true- either shine or gloom huH?
which reminds me- i went abroad to study in china last summer- and even though it was unbearably hot- it would sometimes rain at night- and the thunder is ridiculously LOUD
good job
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flash clears dark here, there
thunders shock, show silver sky
choose dark, light or rest! - oo thunder and lightning
true- either shine or gloom huH?
which reminds me- i went abroad to study in china last summer- and even though it was unbearably hot- it would sometimes rain at night- and the thunder is ridiculously LOUD
good job
Comment Written 03-Jun-2006
Comment from GRSaine
Hi ALCREATOR WRITER,
Very good work with your haiku, "O T'Bolt!", It follows well the rules of the form both in rhythm and in subject. The excellent word choice brings out the meaning of the poem very clearly.
GRSaine
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Hi ALCREATOR WRITER,
Very good work with your haiku, "O T'Bolt!", It follows well the rules of the form both in rhythm and in subject. The excellent word choice brings out the meaning of the poem very clearly.
GRSaine
Comment Written 03-Jun-2006
Comment from sandramarie
You certainly have a way with the Haiku, Alcreator Writer. You have painted outstanding, vivid imagery with so few, well-chosen words. Well done.
Thanks for sharing.
Sandy
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You certainly have a way with the Haiku, Alcreator Writer. You have painted outstanding, vivid imagery with so few, well-chosen words. Well done.
Thanks for sharing.
Sandy
Comment Written 03-Jun-2006
Comment from lovebear641
oh boy here i go again ...i love these peoms ..and so hard for me to understand them ...its a perfect poem ..so much put in such a few words ...but i'm thinking more than a thunderstorm here ..since your words said REST at the end ..could it be that some one is over worked and is very tired or someone has been fighting to represent the lighting and the colors ...and its over and time to rest...hope you will enlighten me as to the meaning ..just drives me nuts for i wont let it alone...loved it ..so pretty a peom
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oh boy here i go again ...i love these peoms ..and so hard for me to understand them ...its a perfect poem ..so much put in such a few words ...but i'm thinking more than a thunderstorm here ..since your words said REST at the end ..could it be that some one is over worked and is very tired or someone has been fighting to represent the lighting and the colors ...and its over and time to rest...hope you will enlighten me as to the meaning ..just drives me nuts for i wont let it alone...loved it ..so pretty a peom
Comment Written 03-Jun-2006
