O My God and Mother Nature!
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "O T' bolt!"Appreciation of God and Mother Nature
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Comment from Badger_29
Oh joy proclaimed, go Tell it on the mountain! I hear your words thundering across the great land into the mines and hearts of the revers here and other readers who read without reviewing.
It's difficult to explain how your poetry really makes me feel it makes me feel young exuberant alive aware and alert!
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Oh joy proclaimed, go Tell it on the mountain! I hear your words thundering across the great land into the mines and hearts of the revers here and other readers who read without reviewing.
It's difficult to explain how your poetry really makes me feel it makes me feel young exuberant alive aware and alert!
Comment Written 10-Jul-2021
Comment from Eunice Amero
oh my thunder bolts can be so dangerous. They are shape bright, electrical and can distory. Should never stand out in it. You have showed a good picture. You did a good job. Thank you for sharing.
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oh my thunder bolts can be so dangerous. They are shape bright, electrical and can distory. Should never stand out in it. You have showed a good picture. You did a good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2021
Comment from kahpot
Very well said, with wonderful alliteration and meaning, lightening does clear the darkness, as light clears the way in life, very well presented****kahpot
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Very well said, with wonderful alliteration and meaning, lightening does clear the darkness, as light clears the way in life, very well presented****kahpot
Comment Written 23-Jun-2021
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Another lovely poem and another wonderful one to read and bring to life in my own mind.. I do think it so unfair that those who give you a 6 star rating are not shown just because someone doesn't understand your words. They shouldn't review with that in mind. I think it is just to get the member dollars. Good work and a pleasure again to read. xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Another lovely poem and another wonderful one to read and bring to life in my own mind.. I do think it so unfair that those who give you a 6 star rating are not shown just because someone doesn't understand your words. They shouldn't review with that in mind. I think it is just to get the member dollars. Good work and a pleasure again to read. xsx Sandra
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR TRUTHFUL REVIEW.
Comment from hollydee
Another great picture to match a beautiful poem. The pic looks like a sunset off of a nearby bayou. Lightning is so beautiful and artistic to watch, then it is followed by the powerful crash of thunder. I thought your notes were great too.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2006
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Another great picture to match a beautiful poem. The pic looks like a sunset off of a nearby bayou. Lightning is so beautiful and artistic to watch, then it is followed by the powerful crash of thunder. I thought your notes were great too.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2006
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2006
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THANK YOU FOR THIS ORDERLY REVIEW I APPRECIATE.
Comment from rl dubour
O T' bolt! See and perceive, I see two objectives in this work, one the looming thunder and lightning that is overhead in the darkness as the bolts light the pre dusk sky. As one views the dark clouds off in the distant is the silver lining, as they say for every dark cloud a silver lining. Now, the other image I see, I see a person frightened and worried of life. The fear of holding emotional pain within and not being able to see beyond their fears. Some what rejected and timid jumping at noise or anything that should frighten them. For them the silver lining is solitude in their own world where they feel emotional stress as they huddle in a corner just doing their best to cope. Ron
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O T' bolt! See and perceive, I see two objectives in this work, one the looming thunder and lightning that is overhead in the darkness as the bolts light the pre dusk sky. As one views the dark clouds off in the distant is the silver lining, as they say for every dark cloud a silver lining. Now, the other image I see, I see a person frightened and worried of life. The fear of holding emotional pain within and not being able to see beyond their fears. Some what rejected and timid jumping at noise or anything that should frighten them. For them the silver lining is solitude in their own world where they feel emotional stress as they huddle in a corner just doing their best to cope. Ron
Comment Written 06-Jun-2006
Comment from Sandisan
A good poem. Says a lot in just a few words. Light breaking through the darkness of a person's soul. How to decide which way to go? Light or dark? So many questions.
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A good poem. Says a lot in just a few words. Light breaking through the darkness of a person's soul. How to decide which way to go? Light or dark? So many questions.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2006
Comment from ooo JO ooo
This doesn't do much of anything for me. Haiku doesn't do much of anything for me, as a rule. This doesn't show me lightning or leave my senses tingling. The last line seems somehow detached from the rest of this haiku.
Best wishes to you!
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This doesn't do much of anything for me. Haiku doesn't do much of anything for me, as a rule. This doesn't show me lightning or leave my senses tingling. The last line seems somehow detached from the rest of this haiku.
Best wishes to you!
Comment Written 05-Jun-2006
Comment from Sam Manilla
Yup, it's a haiku with its 5 syllables, 7 syllables and then 5 again. It also has the nature them that haikus are normally attributed with. You did an adequate job of explaining a thunderbolt. Thank you for the high payout for such a short poem.
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Yup, it's a haiku with its 5 syllables, 7 syllables and then 5 again. It also has the nature them that haikus are normally attributed with. You did an adequate job of explaining a thunderbolt. Thank you for the high payout for such a short poem.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2006
Comment from Anti-Theist
I think I followed in that this was about a thunderstorm at night, but it did come off as a bit hard for me to understand in the way it was written. I still enjoyed reading it! Keep writing.
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I think I followed in that this was about a thunderstorm at night, but it did come off as a bit hard for me to understand in the way it was written. I still enjoyed reading it! Keep writing.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2006
