O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from drivenbackward
Though it was so short, I still wondered where you were going as I read the first two lines. The ending took a lot of thought for me (I know it shouldn't have), but I got it. Clever.
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Though it was so short, I still wondered where you were going as I read the first two lines. The ending took a lot of thought for me (I know it shouldn't have), but I got it. Clever.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2006
Comment from Harvey Keefe
While the though provokes more is needed this proves the refreshing of less is more
again never being too much-- but to make a writing this tight a confidence must prevail, which is seen through and through.
How much is said... how time is spared... thank you
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While the though provokes more is needed this proves the refreshing of less is more
again never being too much-- but to make a writing this tight a confidence must prevail, which is seen through and through.
How much is said... how time is spared... thank you
Comment Written 24-Jun-2006
Comment from OceanicEyes
I am really starting like haikus! At first I thought they were a quick cheepy way to skip out on writing a more meaningful piece of poetry, because of their length.
But ones like these really impress me. You contained the essence of wind very well, branching it into such things as how fast rage can fly, news as well, etc.
Very well done. Color me impressed!
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I am really starting like haikus! At first I thought they were a quick cheepy way to skip out on writing a more meaningful piece of poetry, because of their length.
But ones like these really impress me. You contained the essence of wind very well, branching it into such things as how fast rage can fly, news as well, etc.
Very well done. Color me impressed!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2006
Comment from Senyai
Lovely, Allcreatorwriter. I like the reference to the speed and movement here. So expressive of the nature of the wind. The harbors the character and the nature of many things, the speed at which news can travel, the quickness of anger, the mood of people. Very nice.
Foxey
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Lovely, Allcreatorwriter. I like the reference to the speed and movement here. So expressive of the nature of the wind. The harbors the character and the nature of many things, the speed at which news can travel, the quickness of anger, the mood of people. Very nice.
Foxey
Comment Written 24-Jun-2006
Comment from trailblazer101
Sounds like the media working overtime on the television...at least to me.
sky blush lights
news spreads, glow in dark!
Whatever, it's a good quick truthful look through the generations
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Sounds like the media working overtime on the television...at least to me.
sky blush lights
news spreads, glow in dark!
Whatever, it's a good quick truthful look through the generations
Comment Written 24-Jun-2006
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Another wonderfully written haiku from you... Great job on the syllable and haiku formatting rules. Good flow and vivid imagery as well. Nice work!
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Another wonderfully written haiku from you... Great job on the syllable and haiku formatting rules. Good flow and vivid imagery as well. Nice work!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2006
Comment from greeneyes
You stuck true to Haiku form & it is very thought provoking....the poem is very well written with a wonderful first line!.
I enjoyed the color scheme you chose to display your poem
thanks for sharing!
:)
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You stuck true to Haiku form & it is very thought provoking....the poem is very well written with a wonderful first line!.
I enjoyed the color scheme you chose to display your poem
thanks for sharing!
:)
Comment Written 24-Jun-2006
Comment from Kingsland
this is not a very good piece of poetry
but to be fair
I will give it a decent rating
but this piece just did not really envolve me
into a rhythm of your words
and I thought it lacked emotions
but it did follow the form and format for this kind of poetry... John
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this is not a very good piece of poetry
but to be fair
I will give it a decent rating
but this piece just did not really envolve me
into a rhythm of your words
and I thought it lacked emotions
but it did follow the form and format for this kind of poetry... John
Comment Written 24-Jun-2006
Comment from hollydee
Very good. Haikus are not my favorite form of poetry but mostly because I was never any good at them. I loved the colors, the white on black emphasizes the glow in the dark to me. Congrats on all your decorations and accomplishments.
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Very good. Haikus are not my favorite form of poetry but mostly because I was never any good at them. I loved the colors, the white on black emphasizes the glow in the dark to me. Congrats on all your decorations and accomplishments.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2006
Comment from cutie
Too few words...yes there's message or/and lots of messages hided in it but if you make some philosophy,every word has lots of meanings and/also tons of messages.For example:"message" word including a lot of message :)
Oh sorry if i seemed to you as babbling -no- only i try to do my best judgements and yoo know i won't make an extra profit by giving you 4 and 5 or 6 stars.In my opinion your poem needing a bit more lines or smt different.
For its good sides,it's very sunny,gracious and cute poem.
Big thanks to share it with me :)
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Too few words...yes there's message or/and lots of messages hided in it but if you make some philosophy,every word has lots of meanings and/also tons of messages.For example:"message" word including a lot of message :)
Oh sorry if i seemed to you as babbling -no- only i try to do my best judgements and yoo know i won't make an extra profit by giving you 4 and 5 or 6 stars.In my opinion your poem needing a bit more lines or smt different.
For its good sides,it's very sunny,gracious and cute poem.
Big thanks to share it with me :)
Comment Written 24-Jun-2006
