O My God and Mother Nature!
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "O Winds!"Appreciation of God and Mother Nature
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Comment from RaymondJohn
Movement, activation and lesson are all present in good measure. I enjoyed your short work very much. All the best. Ray.
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Movement, activation and lesson are all present in good measure. I enjoyed your short work very much. All the best. Ray.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2006
Comment from pbearse
I suspect the only one who recognizes true claification of your work is you, but they do make one ponder, which many people enjoy, and I would imagine that your reviews interest you, in their diversity, as much as the writing. This to me looks like birth, a spreading of the news, and recognition.
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I suspect the only one who recognizes true claification of your work is you, but they do make one ponder, which many people enjoy, and I would imagine that your reviews interest you, in their diversity, as much as the writing. This to me looks like birth, a spreading of the news, and recognition.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2006
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi ALCREATOR,
What I get from this write, Man is always rushing around and never seem to know how to see the real meaning of life,which seems to be in our genes, I may be pretty far off but that is the way I see this poem.
I like you thinking. Great work.
Gert
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Hi ALCREATOR,
What I get from this write, Man is always rushing around and never seem to know how to see the real meaning of life,which seems to be in our genes, I may be pretty far off but that is the way I see this poem.
I like you thinking. Great work.
Gert
Comment Written 27-Jun-2006
Comment from BellasTales
Hello Al
Ok, this one didnt quite move as the others did.
Found it to be a bit choppy- but still nicely done.
Nice work
BT
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Hello Al
Ok, this one didnt quite move as the others did.
Found it to be a bit choppy- but still nicely done.
Nice work
BT
Comment Written 27-Jun-2006
Comment from Raquelle
Very nicely written Haiku....there is nothing negative to say here...it is wonderful
O winds speed rage mode!
flow genes for lives, sky blush lights
news spreads, glow in dark!
just spledid writing
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Very nicely written Haiku....there is nothing negative to say here...it is wonderful
O winds speed rage mode!
flow genes for lives, sky blush lights
news spreads, glow in dark!
just spledid writing
Comment Written 27-Jun-2006
Comment from ScarletAffliction
O winds speed rage mode!
flow genes for lives, sky blush lights
news spreads, glow in dark!
Loves these secretive little lines. :)
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O winds speed rage mode!
flow genes for lives, sky blush lights
news spreads, glow in dark!
Loves these secretive little lines. :)
Comment Written 26-Jun-2006
Comment from LadyTaz72
I enjoyed this you always aid the reader to understand which always adds more meaning, you are a very good poet and I hope that I maybe able to reach these standards one day.
Will be definitely looking out for more of your work!
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I enjoyed this you always aid the reader to understand which always adds more meaning, you are a very good poet and I hope that I maybe able to reach these standards one day.
Will be definitely looking out for more of your work!
Comment Written 26-Jun-2006
Comment from Ponder
Hi Alcreator writer,
I suppose nothing creates a raging movement like man does.
I think this poem describes the rush on man across this planet, or at least that what it describes to me, though that may not be your intent as a poet. I imagine the march of generations and many habitats of man.
Nicely organised and written
Ponder
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Hi Alcreator writer,
I suppose nothing creates a raging movement like man does.
I think this poem describes the rush on man across this planet, or at least that what it describes to me, though that may not be your intent as a poet. I imagine the march of generations and many habitats of man.
Nicely organised and written
Ponder
Comment Written 26-Jun-2006
Comment from suresh kumar
Another short and sweet poem with deep meaning. Your poem has made me to take interest in Haiku.
Thanks for sharing.
.suresh kumar.
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Another short and sweet poem with deep meaning. Your poem has made me to take interest in Haiku.
Thanks for sharing.
.suresh kumar.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2006
Comment from Alex in BC
I don't get it. I know that's not what you want to hear, but I don't.
I get, things like my wife wrote in 1987:
Birds that feed
on crusty snow
one toss, a throw.
I have only read through yours 20 times and thought for 10 minutes. But I get a feeling right away when I think of Nancy's poem. I get a feeling which I quickly get, and I like that. I don't like reading something 20 times and thinking I should spend some more time on it so I get it. I want to feel good about myself all the time and understand things.
I am sure it is excellent from a technical point of view.
Alex
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I don't get it. I know that's not what you want to hear, but I don't.
I get, things like my wife wrote in 1987:
Birds that feed
on crusty snow
one toss, a throw.
I have only read through yours 20 times and thought for 10 minutes. But I get a feeling right away when I think of Nancy's poem. I get a feeling which I quickly get, and I like that. I don't like reading something 20 times and thinking I should spend some more time on it so I get it. I want to feel good about myself all the time and understand things.
I am sure it is excellent from a technical point of view.
Alex
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2006
