The Look of Love
3-6-9 contest entry18 total reviews
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I rarely give a six for short pieces, but this one is a winner to me. Perfect count for the 3-6-9 contest and the wording is so cute and perfectly done for descriptions
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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I rarely give a six for short pieces, but this one is a winner to me. Perfect count for the 3-6-9 contest and the wording is so cute and perfectly done for descriptions
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Hi Barba :)
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and generous 6 star rating. I appreciate both!
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from robyn corum
Debra,
Oh, my. After the last two hours of 'going down for a nap' with my grandgirls -- please let me switch with you?? I think I'd really rather spend the time with that adorable little pup right now. Arrrrrgghhhh...
This was a fun one. The syllable counts were all just right and I sure appreciate the smile!
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Debra,
Oh, my. After the last two hours of 'going down for a nap' with my grandgirls -- please let me switch with you?? I think I'd really rather spend the time with that adorable little pup right now. Arrrrrgghhhh...
This was a fun one. The syllable counts were all just right and I sure appreciate the smile!
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your lovely feedback, Robyn :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from RodG
Dog lovers will truly enjoy this very short poem describing that "look of love" one only gets from a dog. I can smell that fur and hear that wagging tail. Wish that pup in the photo were mine. Rod
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Dog lovers will truly enjoy this very short poem describing that "look of love" one only gets from a dog. I can smell that fur and hear that wagging tail. Wish that pup in the photo were mine. Rod
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Hi Rod :)
Thanks so much for your lovely feedback.
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Sally Law
A great photo of your spaniel. She's a doll, that Molly. A biscuit eater, aye? Not so awful. Sounds amazing.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest
Sal XOs...
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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A great photo of your spaniel. She's a doll, that Molly. A biscuit eater, aye? Not so awful. Sounds amazing.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest
Sal XOs...
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Hi Sal :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing my poem.
Glad you enjoyed it!
Best wishes as always, Debra :)
Comment from royowen
What a divine little dog, they are the most appealing of "people" one can get, but like humans, you can't put them in a box, they are generally most salubrious as a person and member on one's household, beautifully written Debra, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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What a divine little dog, they are the most appealing of "people" one can get, but like humans, you can't put them in a box, they are generally most salubrious as a person and member on one's household, beautifully written Debra, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your feedback, Roy, I appreciate it.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from pome lover
well, you must have a very clean dog. Just kidding - well sorta.
Precious poem and picture - and I'm sure Miss Molly is precious, too.
I'm trying to think what a biscuit smells like. Can't but it's nice, I'm sure, and not doggy.
Neat poem. good luck in the contest.
pome lover
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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well, you must have a very clean dog. Just kidding - well sorta.
Precious poem and picture - and I'm sure Miss Molly is precious, too.
I'm trying to think what a biscuit smells like. Can't but it's nice, I'm sure, and not doggy.
Neat poem. good luck in the contest.
pome lover
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Hi :) Thank you for your lovely feedback. I appreciate it! Best wishes, Debra
Comment from zanya
Such a cutie - our faithful canines are always there for us - love that expression 'biscuit-scented fur' and that expression in the photo says it all
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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Such a cutie - our faithful canines are always there for us - love that expression 'biscuit-scented fur' and that expression in the photo says it all
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Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your lovely feedback, Zanya :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from lightink
LOL! I never liked dog smell! I thought it was supposed to smell like that because he ATE those biscuits!
The poem is cute and works perfectly without the picture, too (for the wagging tail gives it away :). I like the wording 'devotion has' :).
Your love for your pup shines through - and the one on the Pic is quite a cutie! Good luck at the contest!
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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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LOL! I never liked dog smell! I thought it was supposed to smell like that because he ATE those biscuits!
The poem is cute and works perfectly without the picture, too (for the wagging tail gives it away :). I like the wording 'devotion has' :).
Your love for your pup shines through - and the one on the Pic is quite a cutie! Good luck at the contest!
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Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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LOL! I don't like the smell of wet dog, it's vile.... but the warm biscuitiness when you bury your nose into Molly's fur is just a big inhale of comfort!
Thanks for your great feedback :)
Best wishes as always, Debra x
