Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 52 "Enfolding Eternity"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
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Comment from Bill Pinder
Yvette, Excellent poem that matches a very unique picture with your well chosen words. Thanks for sharing this writing that speaks of positive energy in nature. Bill
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Yvette, Excellent poem that matches a very unique picture with your well chosen words. Thanks for sharing this writing that speaks of positive energy in nature. Bill
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thanx so much, Bill, for stopping by on this shorty, sir -- great to hear from you! ;) Things actually get back to a regular routine for me this week (until the house sells... lol!). Take care of you and I'll be checkin' in more often! ;) Yvette
Comment from amada
What you write here is very beautiful, spiritual and very well in accord to the rhyme of nature. I love nature, it is one of my best inspirations. I wish I knew more to say. lessings.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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What you write here is very beautiful, spiritual and very well in accord to the rhyme of nature. I love nature, it is one of my best inspirations. I wish I knew more to say. lessings.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thanx so much, amada, for stopping by on this shorty -- great to hear from you! ;) Enjoy the rest of the weekend out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Enfolding Eternity
by Y. M. Roger
Hello, Yvette,
Beautiful couplet for the renga book. Excellent chapter that fits nicely with my haiku. I noticed you wrote the word nature in your couplet, which is my haiku. We are not supposed to repeat words from one chapter to the next.
Regardless all strife
Life goes on and (nature) reigns
Divine love cycle
Thank you very much for adding a chapter. Well done my friend.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Enfolding Eternity
by Y. M. Roger
Hello, Yvette,
Beautiful couplet for the renga book. Excellent chapter that fits nicely with my haiku. I noticed you wrote the word nature in your couplet, which is my haiku. We are not supposed to repeat words from one chapter to the next.
Regardless all strife
Life goes on and (nature) reigns
Divine love cycle
Thank you very much for adding a chapter. Well done my friend.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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My apologies again, Gypsy. Thank you for the five stars, though! :) Yvette
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No worries, most chapters need little adjustments here and there... it's to be expected with such book. You always do a great job.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Boom!
Ah! Yvette!
Found it!
Holding on to it!
Won't let go; I promise!
Beautiful couplet that goes along with a tanka I am just about to post!
Damn, girl! Like minds!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Boom!
Ah! Yvette!
Found it!
Holding on to it!
Won't let go; I promise!
Beautiful couplet that goes along with a tanka I am just about to post!
Damn, girl! Like minds!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Hooray!! :) :) You have managed to make me smile here - wasn't sure it would happen a whole lot today... but here it is! ;) Things actually get back to a regular routine for me this week (until the house sells... lol!). Take care of you and I'll be checkin' in more often! ;) Yvette
Comment from royowen
In times like we are "enjoying" at the moment, one will find that good things will be easy to see, They stand out like a candle in absolute darkness. Beautifully written my friend, excellent job, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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In times like we are "enjoying" at the moment, one will find that good things will be easy to see, They stand out like a candle in absolute darkness. Beautifully written my friend, excellent job, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thanx so much, Roy, for stopping by on this shorty, sir -- great to hear from you! ;) Things actually get back to a regular routine for me this week (until the house sells... lol!). Take care of you and I'll be checkin' in more often! ;) Yvette
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Bless you Yvette,
Comment from lightink
Thank you so much for the superb message! Nature's rhythm is fully alive and we can find it within and without! I love it, and it does help me remember! :)
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Thank you so much for the superb message! Nature's rhythm is fully alive and we can find it within and without! I love it, and it does help me remember! :)
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Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
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Thanx so much, Jyoti, for stopping by on this shorty, my lady -- great to hear from you! ;) Things actually get back to a regular routine for me this week (until the house sells... lol!). Take care of you and I'll be checkin' in more often! ;) Yvette
Comment from Raul1
I like how you structured this poem. It is clear and concise. I like your piece of poetry. Well written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Nice work! I like it. Thanks for sharing!
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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020
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I like how you structured this poem. It is clear and concise. I like your piece of poetry. Well written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Nice work! I like it. Thanks for sharing!
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Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your review, Raul - always good to hear from you!! ;) Yvette
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You're welcome.
