A Brighter Road
Hoping for a brighter life50 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
The poems you post on here brighten MY life. The simple, sincere wish you have to touch others is effectively and descriptively conveyed in every wonderful line,
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The poems you post on here brighten MY life. The simple, sincere wish you have to touch others is effectively and descriptively conveyed in every wonderful line,
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
A Brighter Road
by jaybird1
Hello, Mr Jay,
I can imagine how hard it must be to stay positive with our present state of affairs. It's hard for me too. And I understand depression... it's hard to overcome it but you don't give up...good for you.
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A Brighter Road
by jaybird1
Hello, Mr Jay,
I can imagine how hard it must be to stay positive with our present state of affairs. It's hard for me too. And I understand depression... it's hard to overcome it but you don't give up...good for you.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
Comment from June Sargent
The dawn of each new will bring with it new possibilities. It is a blessing to see the sun sine and hear the birds sing - those are divine gifts. Don't let anything take the joy out of your life right now. Keep focusing on what you have still have. And on your writing.
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The dawn of each new will bring with it new possibilities. It is a blessing to see the sun sine and hear the birds sing - those are divine gifts. Don't let anything take the joy out of your life right now. Keep focusing on what you have still have. And on your writing.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
You are doing a fantastic job being the right example to people who read your writings. You can take them through all walks of life and all facets of it.
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You are doing a fantastic job being the right example to people who read your writings. You can take them through all walks of life and all facets of it.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
Comment from Lennie Conrad
This was a powerful poem that illustrates the internal fears and conflicts that people face both early and late in their adult lives. It is easy to let the darkness of life overtake your spirit, but the bright light of the soul can always shine through if you allow it to do so.
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This was a powerful poem that illustrates the internal fears and conflicts that people face both early and late in their adult lives. It is easy to let the darkness of life overtake your spirit, but the bright light of the soul can always shine through if you allow it to do so.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written uplifting poem. The path may seem long and lonely but we're never alone wherever we go Jesus is our companion through the good times and the hard times until the end of our time.
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A very well-written uplifting poem. The path may seem long and lonely but we're never alone wherever we go Jesus is our companion through the good times and the hard times until the end of our time.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A beautiful collection of quatrains looking forward while still not quite sure about making it during most days... but hopeful all the same. :) ;) Thanx for sharing, jaybird! ;)
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A beautiful collection of quatrains looking forward while still not quite sure about making it during most days... but hopeful all the same. :) ;) Thanx for sharing, jaybird! ;)
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
Comment from Cindy Decker
Jaybird,
A warm, poem of passion
for a person of years whose lost many friends through passing. I would like to say all the bright cheery stuff about wonderful living, but I know everyone has trials.
The only constant in life is love, and the most steadfast is that of Jesus.
I love your poems also, Jaybird, because they are bittersweet, yet full of hope.
Have a wonderful week. and keep on writing.
Blessings, Cindy
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Jaybird,
A warm, poem of passion
for a person of years whose lost many friends through passing. I would like to say all the bright cheery stuff about wonderful living, but I know everyone has trials.
The only constant in life is love, and the most steadfast is that of Jesus.
I love your poems also, Jaybird, because they are bittersweet, yet full of hope.
Have a wonderful week. and keep on writing.
Blessings, Cindy
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
Comment from Mastery
Wonderful poetry, jay. Very inspiring when the chips are down and things are not going well. You always use just the right words, my friend. I am getting ready to take that last path onward too. After 80, you should certainly be ready, huh? :) Bob
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Wonderful poetry, jay. Very inspiring when the chips are down and things are not going well. You always use just the right words, my friend. I am getting ready to take that last path onward too. After 80, you should certainly be ready, huh? :) Bob
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Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Oh I hope you do keep trying. I love your poetry. So, if your down remember how happy it makes those who read your poetry. Please don't stop.
Ralf
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Oh I hope you do keep trying. I love your poetry. So, if your down remember how happy it makes those who read your poetry. Please don't stop.
Ralf
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Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
