Sweet Dreams
(2-4-2) Keep the faith...12 total reviews
Comment from lightink
Such a lovely message, spiced up by lovely 's' and 'd' alliteration. The word that makes this piece truly fascinating is 'destiny' - as if those dreams are part of our destiny! Great little 2-6-2! Thank you for sharing and good luck at the contest!
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Such a lovely message, spiced up by lovely 's' and 'd' alliteration. The word that makes this piece truly fascinating is 'destiny' - as if those dreams are part of our destiny! Great little 2-6-2! Thank you for sharing and good luck at the contest!
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-4-2, Sweet Dreams, has the right set up and seems to promise that the best things that are hoped for you will eventually awaken to.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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This 2-4-2, Sweet Dreams, has the right set up and seems to promise that the best things that are hoped for you will eventually awaken to.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your review, Bill.
Comment from RShipp
With all thw isolation that is needed in today's world, it's important to hold on to the dreams! Enjoyed.
I believe you have met the requirements for this contest: Write a 2-4-2 syllable poem. It has three lines. The first line has 2 syllables, the second one 4 syllables and the last line 2 syllables. The subject can be anything.
Best of luck with the "2-4-2 writing prompt" contest.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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With all thw isolation that is needed in today's world, it's important to hold on to the dreams! Enjoyed.
I believe you have met the requirements for this contest: Write a 2-4-2 syllable poem. It has three lines. The first line has 2 syllables, the second one 4 syllables and the last line 2 syllables. The subject can be anything.
Best of luck with the "2-4-2 writing prompt" contest.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Thanks for reviewing my poem.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
I could understand your subject in the words you chose for the entry for the 2-4-2 writing prompt. I wish you great good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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I could understand your subject in the words you chose for the entry for the 2-4-2 writing prompt. I wish you great good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
A fine entry for the 2-4-2 writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Nice presentation. I like the destiny topic.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
A fine entry for the 2-4-2 writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Nice presentation. I like the destiny topic.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, we all have to have something to which to look forward -- never stop the dreaming! ;) A fun offering for the contest here - best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Oh, we all have to have something to which to look forward -- never stop the dreaming! ;) A fun offering for the contest here - best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from royowen
Another blue poem, great background and bedrock for this marvellous entry in this contest, the artwork promotes it, and the narrative completes the post, good luck, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Another blue poem, great background and bedrock for this marvellous entry in this contest, the artwork promotes it, and the narrative completes the post, good luck, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Thank you!
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Blessings
Comment from Lennie Conrad
the juxtaposition of the second and third lines is interesting. 'Destiny' is often a motif that is characterized by flame and passion. Here, it is sleeping. To me, it says destiny will not come to life without you first waking it up. However, we are ordered to let destiny keep sleeping. The poem is really a bit dark with this consideration. I like it.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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the juxtaposition of the second and third lines is interesting. 'Destiny' is often a motif that is characterized by flame and passion. Here, it is sleeping. To me, it says destiny will not come to life without you first waking it up. However, we are ordered to let destiny keep sleeping. The poem is really a bit dark with this consideration. I like it.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Thanks for you appreciation of my poem.
Comment from zanya
What an encouraging nugget of advice for youth in this short poetic format - let nothing stop those wonderful youthful dreams 'destiny's/sweet dreams'
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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What an encouraging nugget of advice for youth in this short poetic format - let nothing stop those wonderful youthful dreams 'destiny's/sweet dreams'
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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I think we need to keep dreaming to imagine our future with positivity.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 2-4-2 poem about sweet dreams that we can continue having when we never stop our goals to find out destiny. Keep on pushing forward until you reach the goal.
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A very well-written 2-4-2 poem about sweet dreams that we can continue having when we never stop our goals to find out destiny. Keep on pushing forward until you reach the goal.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
