The Joy of a Peppered Pickle
a modified Peppered Pickle40 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
What a delightful peppered pickle poem about the peppered pickle dish! It moves me to want to eat one now. Great form and I think it's fine to modify with a two-syllable first word!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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What a delightful peppered pickle poem about the peppered pickle dish! It moves me to want to eat one now. Great form and I think it's fine to modify with a two-syllable first word!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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Thank you, lol. I got a kick out of the name Dolly gave this form she created, and I wanted to include it in the title of my poem. Glad you had fun with it.
Comment from karenina
Ah, two syllables is just fine with this reader....but if "modified" mollifies the nit-pickers so be it! I love this form and you've done it proud by writing a Peppered Pickle ABOUT Peppered Pickles! Way cool!--Karenina
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Ah, two syllables is just fine with this reader....but if "modified" mollifies the nit-pickers so be it! I love this form and you've done it proud by writing a Peppered Pickle ABOUT Peppered Pickles! Way cool!--Karenina
Comment Written 15-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Karen, I really had fun with this! Don't remember such a good time writing a poem.(lol).
Comment from l.raven
HI Eternal Muse, I didn't know about Dolly's new form...I have been off the site so much...
I love your poem...and the picture made my mouth water...
very well done...and very well written...God Bless...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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HI Eternal Muse, I didn't know about Dolly's new form...I have been off the site so much...
I love your poem...and the picture made my mouth water...
very well done...and very well written...God Bless...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the great review. Its a fun form.
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it sounds like it...your so very welcome...love xxoo
Comment from harmony13
I liked the description the author gave to a Peppered Pickle. It was
appetizing, light, and spicy! The read was interesting and colorful.
The poem conveyed a healthy snack. The poem flows and connects
well. Thanks for the author's notes. Have a great Friday!
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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I liked the description the author gave to a Peppered Pickle. It was
appetizing, light, and spicy! The read was interesting and colorful.
The poem conveyed a healthy snack. The poem flows and connects
well. Thanks for the author's notes. Have a great Friday!
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the great review.
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
Very well done on a complex poetry form! Also quite a cute way to approach a vegetable. I particularly liked this line: "this wonder veggie lights your fire." I'm sure it would depend on the "heat" rating of the pepper, but generally speaking, yes it does! :-)
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Very well done on a complex poetry form! Also quite a cute way to approach a vegetable. I particularly liked this line: "this wonder veggie lights your fire." I'm sure it would depend on the "heat" rating of the pepper, but generally speaking, yes it does! :-)
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the great review.
Comment from kahpot
What a wonderful form of poetry it does look rather difficult and I can see why it might pickle the brain, I like the use of your first word and think with some forma we should be able to improvise a weee bit, very well done****kahpot
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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What a wonderful form of poetry it does look rather difficult and I can see why it might pickle the brain, I like the use of your first word and think with some forma we should be able to improvise a weee bit, very well done****kahpot
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the great review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
a modified Peppered Pickle
The Joy of a Peppered Pickle
by Eternal Muse
Hello,
Dolly's new poetic form is very popular in this site. It's an interesting form and you did a good job for your first time. The pickle topic is funny.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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a modified Peppered Pickle
The Joy of a Peppered Pickle
by Eternal Muse
Hello,
Dolly's new poetic form is very popular in this site. It's an interesting form and you did a good job for your first time. The pickle topic is funny.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the great review, I am glad you liked my rendition.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Eternal Muse I take it you are the one is giving us fun while reading your pickling rhyming poems good line when you said
It pickles your brain.
Gert
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Eternal Muse I take it you are the one is giving us fun while reading your pickling rhyming poems good line when you said
It pickles your brain.
Gert
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Gert. I am glad you liked it.
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You are welcome Eternal Muse
Gert
Comment from RShipp
What an interesting new format for a poem.
I do love those pickles- but I don't prefer the hotter tasting ones.
Well done- I might give this new style of poems a try!
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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What an interesting new format for a poem.
I do love those pickles- but I don't prefer the hotter tasting ones.
Well done- I might give this new style of poems a try!
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the great review.
Comment from nomi338
Congratulations, you tickled my fancy, caught my eye and ignited my desire to try something I never thought I would or could. As for this new form of poetry, I am even encouraged to give it a try, although I don't do very much experimenting any more. I am just bored enough to try something that could only hurt my pride and not my suddenly frail body. I am aging right before my own eyes. Never mind that. I loved the poem, good work.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Congratulations, you tickled my fancy, caught my eye and ignited my desire to try something I never thought I would or could. As for this new form of poetry, I am even encouraged to give it a try, although I don't do very much experimenting any more. I am just bored enough to try something that could only hurt my pride and not my suddenly frail body. I am aging right before my own eyes. Never mind that. I loved the poem, good work.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the great review. I am glad you enjoyed it. You should try it - it's a fun form - just watch out for these internal rhymes! (smile).
