A Plea
A 1-6-1 Poem15 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
There have been SO many news stories about pollution of the oceans--
sometimes through deliberate acts, sometimes through ignorance and carelessness. Your eight syllables are certainly well-chosen--as is the artwork!
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There have been SO many news stories about pollution of the oceans--
sometimes through deliberate acts, sometimes through ignorance and carelessness. Your eight syllables are certainly well-chosen--as is the artwork!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-6-1, A Plea, has the right set up and notes that the pollution of our oceans can only go on so long until we kill ourselves.
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This 1-6-1, A Plea, has the right set up and notes that the pollution of our oceans can only go on so long until we kill ourselves.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from RShipp
What a mess! I hope the kid is not barefool!
I believe you have met the requirements of this contest: Write a three-lined poem where line one has 1 syllable, the second line has 6 syllables and the last line has 1 syllable. All lines must rhyme.
Best of luck in the 1-6-1 contest writing prompt contest.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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What a mess! I hope the kid is not barefool!
I believe you have met the requirements of this contest: Write a three-lined poem where line one has 1 syllable, the second line has 6 syllables and the last line has 1 syllable. All lines must rhyme.
Best of luck in the 1-6-1 contest writing prompt contest.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from jaded831
Your message is something I hold close to my heart. Freedom is beautiful but something that should not be taken for granted. Your poem reflects this message, meets the criteria, and huas a meaningful message to match. Thumbs up. Good luck in the contest.
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Your message is something I hold close to my heart. Freedom is beautiful but something that should not be taken for granted. Your poem reflects this message, meets the criteria, and huas a meaningful message to match. Thumbs up. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much for this exceptional review, much appreciated
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
I could understand your subject in the words you chose for the entry for the 2-4-2 writing prompt. I wish you great good luck in the contest!
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I could understand your subject in the words you chose for the entry for the 2-4-2 writing prompt. I wish you great good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Thanks, this was a 1-6-1 prompt entry
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My brain is on a one track mind today. So sorry. I really enjoyed your poem.
Comment from lyenochka
Now that was a unique set of rhymes - -sea - debris - free. And love the ecology message, too. The picture is scary as we don't want children to swim in that but that's part of your message, too. Best wishes in the contest!
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Now that was a unique set of rhymes - -sea - debris - free. And love the ecology message, too. The picture is scary as we don't want children to swim in that but that's part of your message, too. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wise advice here and I liked your message, we must look after our environment and keep it clean, not sure where that picture was taken, but it is appalling, you won my vote here, love Dolly x
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Wise advice here and I liked your message, we must look after our environment and keep it clean, not sure where that picture was taken, but it is appalling, you won my vote here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Cindy Decker
Hi, Kahpot!
I love your 3D photo, along with your wonderful poem. Excellent use of 8 syllables. It all blends together. Excellent work.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Hi, Kahpot!
I love your 3D photo, along with your wonderful poem. Excellent use of 8 syllables. It all blends together. Excellent work.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
A fine entry for the 1-6-1 contest writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Good rhyme and presentation too. I like the sea topic.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
A fine entry for the 1-6-1 contest writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Good rhyme and presentation too. I like the sea topic.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from lightink
If only! You pack your short poem with a meaningful message, navigating the constrictions of the form and triple rhyme well! Good luck at the contest!
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If only! You pack your short poem with a meaningful message, navigating the constrictions of the form and triple rhyme well! Good luck at the contest!
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much
