Sinking boat
Boat problems.2 total reviews
Comment from Gail Guirey
Hi, your poem met the requirements with a good image to go with it. The message of the poem is true indeed and it was expressed in an amusing manner even though in real life it is no laughing matter. Good luck in the contest!
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Hi, your poem met the requirements with a good image to go with it. The message of the poem is true indeed and it was expressed in an amusing manner even though in real life it is no laughing matter. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Cause and reaction, you capture this so naturally in this two liner poem:"
If the bottom of the boat starts to bubble,
It's a sure fire sign the passengers are in trouble." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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Cause and reaction, you capture this so naturally in this two liner poem:"
If the bottom of the boat starts to bubble,
It's a sure fire sign the passengers are in trouble." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
