Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Clever cartoon you selected. It would have helped if the penitent relied on what was in his heart instead of having a message all planned. Things were not working in his favor if he had his phone stolen. Maybe the thief will use it to make his own atonement. Your last line seems lacking a subject. We don't know what was written. Excellent limerick format. judi

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020

Thanks so much Judy for your lovely thoughts and a super review, blessings Roy

reply by judiverse on 13-Aug-2020

You're very welcome. judi

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Uh-oh!! And the technology 'bit him in the a--' again... lol!! ;) A fun little limerick to lift the spirits, Roy - just what the day called for, sir! ;) Thanx for sharing that smile! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020

Thanks so much Yvette, , for these wonderful comments and review, blessings Roy

Comment from richie b

Excellent

Roy,
I am a Catholic and this could be the future!
Very clever.
Peace and Joy,
Richie

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020

Heh, heh, I think you could be right Right. Thanks for these outstanding review, blessings Roy

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

There was ...
by royowen

Hello, Roy,

Now, this is a well crafted
limerick. There's a contest and I thought it was for it but it's not. I read others and yours is the best one so far. You would have done well in the contest. LoL it's funny.

Hugs,.
Gypsy

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020

Thanks Gypsy, for these excellent comments, and groovy review, blessings Roy

Comment from zanya

Excellent

Love it - certainly raises a chuckle while serving to remind us, if we need reminding, that there is nothing the App can't do or achieve !! well done and a great pic

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020

Thanks Zanya,, for these excellent comments, and groovy review, blessings Roy

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Oh Roy, thank you. This is a scream. I enjoyed this so much and a good belly laugh. Fell out of the sky indeed. Right out of God's pocket.
Sending you my best for a fine Limerick!
Sal XOs.....

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020

Thanks Sally,, for these excellent comments, and groovy review, blessings Roy

Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock

Excellent

This is quite funny. I'm wondering how the priest came into possession of the confessor's iphone. Who should confess first, the confessor or the confessee. A good limerick Roy.

Ralf

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020

Heh heh, you are perceptive Raif, thanks for your brilliant review, blessings Roy

Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux

Excellent

Yeah, that's the power of technology! I know I see youngsters and some older people that don't seem to do anything without phones. I think that this would be the last straw for me. Although we know that their is no mediator between God and man now save the man Christ Jesus, I can see technology in the Catholic religion possibly going to this extreme. I could totally be off base with this comment. Thanks for sharing this humorous and well written work. Well done!

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020

I think you?re you?re right Bro, through Jesus we can approach God without any intermediary because of the blood and favour though Christ, thanks dear friend, blessings, Roy

Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.

Excellent

Three are apps for everything nowadays. It wouldn't surprise f there was one for the Catholic confessions. The digital world has really gone too far.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020

Thanks Rebecca, for these excellent comments, and groovy review, blessings Roy

reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 11-Aug-2020

You're very welcome.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Ha ha ha, this made me smile Roy and you have a good meter for this Limerick and it has just the right amount of smut too! I wonder what was on that phone! Ha ha ha, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020

Thanks Dolly, for these excellent comments, and groovy review, blessings Roy