Life span
5/7/5 poem2 total reviews
Comment from Rock'n'Roll
This one is kind of dark. Take that back, very dark, and also somewhat depressing. Although, I can see where the author is coming from as he/she expressed the thought very clearly.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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This one is kind of dark. Take that back, very dark, and also somewhat depressing. Although, I can see where the author is coming from as he/she expressed the thought very clearly.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your time.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Intresting choice of gravitating around the mother womb, when we come to this world but also when we leave it. I like the last stanza :"Death's finality -
Life returning from exile,
back to mother's womb." you leave a door opent to inteprettion with this -Life returning from exile. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Intresting choice of gravitating around the mother womb, when we come to this world but also when we leave it. I like the last stanza :"Death's finality -
Life returning from exile,
back to mother's womb." you leave a door opent to inteprettion with this -Life returning from exile. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Iza my friend, I thank you for your time and the wonderful insights; you are a mind reader.
