Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Wow this is like all of us, very well written . We have been tested andyet we are here to spread the message or to reach out to others. This one is emotional

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020

Thanks a lot Barbara my intentions were perfect on this one I'm in one following entitled,
"Toppling Love"
Ricky

Comment from ebeta

Excellent

Felt like a freestyle verse.

Nothing rhymed with gifts and that threw me off for a second

Good work. I hope to see more from you as I keep reading.

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020

Thanks ebeta,
So much for following me and reviewing my next one coming up is even more amazing entitled,
"Toppling Love"