Dandelions
Poem for Spring7 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
Your action verb "struts" helps set the scene with Spring's confident entry. Dandelions in tousled hair conjures up a memorable image. Your poem is a delight - I'm pleased it got lots of votes.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Your action verb "struts" helps set the scene with Spring's confident entry. Dandelions in tousled hair conjures up a memorable image. Your poem is a delight - I'm pleased it got lots of votes.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Great review zanya
Comment from Roberta Lawrinsky
Dandelions--great flowers.
They make a healthful tea.
Young green dandelion leaves, WITHOUT pesticides of course, are vitamin-filled additions to salads.
Tousled hair is a great image.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Dandelions--great flowers.
They make a healthful tea.
Young green dandelion leaves, WITHOUT pesticides of course, are vitamin-filled additions to salads.
Tousled hair is a great image.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Thanks for reviewing and those interesting comments zanya
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cheers
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Thank you
Comment from RShipp
What a grand word picture! And so true!!
I think you have met the requirements of this contest: Write a poem for spring. You can not use the words: flower, buds, blossoms, rain, new.
Best of luck with the Poem for Spring writing contest.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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What a grand word picture! And so true!!
I think you have met the requirements of this contest: Write a poem for spring. You can not use the words: flower, buds, blossoms, rain, new.
Best of luck with the Poem for Spring writing contest.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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And thanks again for those 6 shining stars ! zanya
Comment from Gert sherwood
Smiles author,
I could picture the lady with her tangled hair trying to keep the wilted dandelions with out falling out.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Smiles author,
I could picture the lady with her tangled hair trying to keep the wilted dandelions with out falling out.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya
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You are welcome zanya
Gert
Comment from Mark D. R.
This is a nice entry for this word restricted contest. Hopefully the FS administrators will not consider your dandelions as a 'flower' word. It would shameful if they did!
I am a big fan of centered text lines for short verses. You also chose a good illustration and colors to accompany your words. In advanced editor mode, consider using a serif font. IMHO it is easier to read.
Best wishes in the voting.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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This is a nice entry for this word restricted contest. Hopefully the FS administrators will not consider your dandelions as a 'flower' word. It would shameful if they did!
I am a big fan of centered text lines for short verses. You also chose a good illustration and colors to accompany your words. In advanced editor mode, consider using a serif font. IMHO it is easier to read.
Best wishes in the voting.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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And thanks for taking time to review and offer some nuggets of writing advice - will try Serif - zanya
Comment from Karen Estep
Good work! You were able to convey the topic staying within the guidelines of what words you could(or couldn't) use! The graphic was perfect for this!
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Good work! You were able to convey the topic staying within the guidelines of what words you could(or couldn't) use! The graphic was perfect for this!
Comment Written 08-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Great review zanya
Comment from lancellot
Well, you didn't use the word flower. I like the way you skirted around the rules and still 'painted' the picture. Good personification of spring as mother Earth, the grass as her hair and the Dandelions a flower in it.
Well done. Good entry
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Well, you didn't use the word flower. I like the way you skirted around the rules and still 'painted' the picture. Good personification of spring as mother Earth, the grass as her hair and the Dandelions a flower in it.
Well done. Good entry
Comment Written 08-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Superb review zanya
