Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

It always feels good to read you Roy. Your writing in itself is a great teacher and every lesson is believable. I know sometimes when I pray, I just have to ask, "Have I learned my lesson yet?" Nice work mdf xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020

Thanks Deborah, for these marvellous comments and super review, blessings Roy

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

Yes, a dream moves mountains, you bring it out so well in this well rhymed and metered poem. Amazing artistic presentation and visuals. Excellent delivery. I truly enjoyed this.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020

Thanks Dear friend,for these marvellous comments and a super Review, blessings, Roy

Comment from Irish Rain

Exceptional

Just wonderful!
So true...every single thing
we try harder for, is temporary...
except salvation.
That's where our treasure is...
I like your notes, so simply
wise!
Blessings...

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020

Thanks Judy, for these marvellous comments and a super Review, blessings, Roy

reply by Irish Rain on 11-Aug-2020

Happy Tuesday!!

reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020

You too Judy

Comment from flylikeaneagle

Exceptional

Roy: so many leaders are selfish instead of leading by love of God and others. Our country needs to vote soon. People are going to parties without masks, rioting, breaking into stores, world mess. It's a tipping scale of sin vs justice. Others pray, worship and trust in God. Great witness to the world, roy. Stars ****************** for you. flylikeaneagle

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020

Thanks Nancy, for these marvellous comments and a super Review, blessings, Roy

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

From dreams to placing them in his hands... a lovely transition and precipice on which to find ourselves... A beautiful offering, Roy - thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020

Thanks Yvette, for these fantastic comments, and review, blessings Roy

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Faith and Trust two very important things we must have and believe in, yes all actions are caught and recorded, loved every stanza of this read, very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020

Thanks Kahpot, for these excellent comments, and groovy review, blessings Roy

Comment from Therese Caron

Exceptional

Excellent poem, very thought provoking. This entire poem it's wonderful to read, but your fifth stanza is outstanding. I also enjoyed your author's notes. How important are some things in this world compared to the big picture? I love " For I know the plans I have for you. Plans to give you hope and a future". A wonderful, intense read.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020

Thanks Terry for these fantastic comments, and a great review, blessings Roy

reply by Therese Caron on 11-Aug-2020

You are very welcome!

Comment from Vanna1

Excellent

A beautiful poem. I like the ending, how you point out the importance of trust. And that you need faith and devotion to achieve it. Great presentation as usual. The flow was wonderful as always.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020

Thanks Vanna, for these excellent comments, and groovy review, blessings Roy

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Man will dream...
by royowen

Hello, Roy,

Riches are not as important as the spirit is. Through your faith you find the strength to get through the hard times. God never leaves your side.

Nice meter and rhymed quatrain poetic form.

Well done,

Hugs,

Gypsy

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020

Thanks Gypsy, for these excellent comments, and groovy review, blessings Roy

Comment from TPAC

Excellent

I found very strong religious concepts, inspiring words of others that watch over us, ruling the final measures allowed man. A profound viewpoint in my given opinion.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020

Thanks so much, for these excellent comments, and groovy review, blessings Roy