Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Come My Love
by Marjon van Bruggen

Hello, Marjon,

How exasperating.... perhaps he didn't know what he was doing but it must had being very difficult on you. I'm sorry you had to go through that. Well done my friend.

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 Comment Written 07-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020

Thanks, Gypsy, for the review. Yes, that is the right word. Exasperating it sure was.

reply by Gypsy Blue Rose on 07-Aug-2020

Is your husband still alive?

reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020

No, Gypsy. I am a widow since two years now.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You did a great job describing this situation, Marjon. Your words flow well. Readers can feel the way he is 'playing' with you even if he can't. Your struggle to cope is evident. In the last line, did you mean 'breathe' rather than breath?
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

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 Comment Written 07-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020

I meant "breathe". Thanks for the review, Jan.