Questionable Housekeeping
Just for the fun of the 'Question' contest...25 total reviews
Comment from Mia Twysted
A very cute and delightful piece. It has a nice beat to it and hops along with you as you read. I like the idea of the gnomes and wish I could hire some myself.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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A very cute and delightful piece. It has a nice beat to it and hops along with you as you read. I like the idea of the gnomes and wish I could hire some myself.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Many thanks, Mia!
Comment from Eternal Muse
This was adorable. I loved the rhyming,meter, cadence, your awesome artistic presentation and picture. I guess, there gnomes our there and they prefer to hide (smile). This is a unique contest, and you did a good job with your rendition.
I wish you a lot of luck in the booths, this should do very well.
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This was adorable. I loved the rhyming,meter, cadence, your awesome artistic presentation and picture. I guess, there gnomes our there and they prefer to hide (smile). This is a unique contest, and you did a good job with your rendition.
I wish you a lot of luck in the booths, this should do very well.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your review!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the Question Poetry contest. You hit the nail on the head. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck!
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This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the Question Poetry contest. You hit the nail on the head. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your review!
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You're welcome.
Comment from Ben B.
This is hilarious. At first I thought you were talking about real gnomes but Im guessing this is about a parent pulling a fast one on their child. Devious ð???
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This is hilarious. At first I thought you were talking about real gnomes but Im guessing this is about a parent pulling a fast one on their child. Devious ð???
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your review!
Comment from Becky Kern-Taylor
Very cute gnome poem, I like that rhythm. You might be onto something with those little guys. I just realized the rules. Very good very rhythm with the questions. The picture was a great addition.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Very cute gnome poem, I like that rhythm. You might be onto something with those little guys. I just realized the rules. Very good very rhythm with the questions. The picture was a great addition.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Many thanks, Becky!
Comment from lyenochka
Cute! I don't have gnomes at home but somehow things to mysteriously disappear. I like your casual and conversational tone for this question contest. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Cute! I don't have gnomes at home but somehow things to mysteriously disappear. I like your casual and conversational tone for this question contest. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your review!
Comment from TommyWrites
This is a clever, funny, easy read! I really liked the lay out of your poem, how you had it play out, and...the end with the pun-great!! I've always liked gnomes for whatever reasons, they're just so likable! You also did a splendid job picking a picture to match your poem. I think you have a good chance in this contest, and I wish you the best of luck!
TommyWrites~
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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This is a clever, funny, easy read! I really liked the lay out of your poem, how you had it play out, and...the end with the pun-great!! I've always liked gnomes for whatever reasons, they're just so likable! You also did a splendid job picking a picture to match your poem. I think you have a good chance in this contest, and I wish you the best of luck!
TommyWrites~
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Thanks so much, Tommy! You have made my day! :)
Comment from mermaids
This is such a fun and unique poem. I love all the questions about the gnomes, who knows, maybe they do housework, they can come to my house. Your poetic flow of lines and verses is light and gives a feel of fantasy to your words. This is also a poem that should be sewn on a fabric and hung on the wall, I can see that with this poem.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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This is such a fun and unique poem. I love all the questions about the gnomes, who knows, maybe they do housework, they can come to my house. Your poetic flow of lines and verses is light and gives a feel of fantasy to your words. This is also a poem that should be sewn on a fabric and hung on the wall, I can see that with this poem.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Thanks so much, mermaids! You have made my day! :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your jaunty rhyming poem here made me smile, I adore your final stanza, I think I'll go for a gnome sweet home, this is a fun write and you entertained me, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Your jaunty rhyming poem here made me smile, I adore your final stanza, I think I'll go for a gnome sweet home, this is a fun write and you entertained me, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Many thanks for your wonderful comments. So glad the little guys made you smile!
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Nicely done. I like the fact each question helps to move the story forward. What a fun poem about gnomes. It is funny and neat.
Well done and you made me want to write one, too.
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Nicely done. I like the fact each question helps to move the story forward. What a fun poem about gnomes. It is funny and neat.
Well done and you made me want to write one, too.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your fun comments!
