The Time Will Come
A Rondaful13 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A beautiful employment of hope in Dolly's Rondaful style, sir -- well done! ;) I just hope we can fully 'get back there'... ;/ :/ Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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A beautiful employment of hope in Dolly's Rondaful style, sir -- well done! ;) I just hope we can fully 'get back there'... ;/ :/ Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Thank you and I enjoyed this style, it is good to learn new things, it would be nice to get some normality back****kahpot
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great poem in the rondaful style. It is current and offers much needed hope. Your line are filled with great imagery, too. Your couplet works well to expand the message and leave it as a lasting impression on reviewers.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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This is a great poem in the rondaful style. It is current and offers much needed hope. Your line are filled with great imagery, too. Your couplet works well to expand the message and leave it as a lasting impression on reviewers.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
Comment from ameen786
I'll say a big AMEN! Quite creative poem reflecting upon the horrific pandemic and giving hope, we shall overcome my friend, yes, the time will come and soon. Thanks for sharing.
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I'll say a big AMEN! Quite creative poem reflecting upon the horrific pandemic and giving hope, we shall overcome my friend, yes, the time will come and soon. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
The Time Will Come
by kahpot
G'day, Kym,
Lovely Rondaful about the end of the Corona virus. I can't wait...I'm so over distancing but we must endure to stay safe. I don't know what is like in Australia but in the USA is really bad.
Well done, my friend.
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The Time Will Come
by kahpot
G'day, Kym,
Lovely Rondaful about the end of the Corona virus. I can't wait...I'm so over distancing but we must endure to stay safe. I don't know what is like in Australia but in the USA is really bad.
Well done, my friend.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Rondaful about the time we are all looking forward to when we can throw away the masks and see each others'faces again with moving lips and smiles.
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A very well-written Rondaful about the time we are all looking forward to when we can throw away the masks and see each others'faces again with moving lips and smiles.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
It seems to follow the proper form. The content is very meaningful to me.
Your hope is what we all hope and pray for. Who would have thought we would yearn for normalcy. Well done.
Ralf
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It seems to follow the proper form. The content is very meaningful to me.
Your hope is what we all hope and pray for. Who would have thought we would yearn for normalcy. Well done.
Ralf
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I adored the sentiments in these words and I am so glad you gave this form a try!
You captured the joys of fresh air and sunshine here. You did an amazing job.
I have just one suggestion for this line for the sake of meter:
"the time will come when worries all will slide"
I wish I had a six left for you, much enjoyed,
Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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I adored the sentiments in these words and I am so glad you gave this form a try!
You captured the joys of fresh air and sunshine here. You did an amazing job.
I have just one suggestion for this line for the sake of meter:
"the time will come when worries all will slide"
I wish I had a six left for you, much enjoyed,
Love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Thank you Dolly, I love this praise and help from the Teacher, I have taken your advice, many thanks and very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Cindy Decker
Kahpot,
This is a wonderful poem of hope to have things back to normal with lessons learned. I love Dolly's style of poems; this one is beautiful. I hope we can reminisce soon about the days we wore masks and that it's now just a fleeting memory. Excellent work, Kahpot.
Best wishes,
Cindy
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Kahpot,
This is a wonderful poem of hope to have things back to normal with lessons learned. I love Dolly's style of poems; this one is beautiful. I hope we can reminisce soon about the days we wore masks and that it's now just a fleeting memory. Excellent work, Kahpot.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the artwork y choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match. To me the dancer is glade to be free.
Which captured my attention from the first lint the last . Yes in due time we will be free.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
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I love the artwork y choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match. To me the dancer is glade to be free.
Which captured my attention from the first lint the last . Yes in due time we will be free.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I really must try one of these! I liked it very much when Dolly explained, and I like it again here. You have done a good job your final couplet: tight, focused and relevant so the rest of the poem slides in easily.
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I really must try one of these! I liked it very much when Dolly explained, and I like it again here. You have done a good job your final couplet: tight, focused and relevant so the rest of the poem slides in easily.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
