I Am???
A contest entry12 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
That's a clever way to have a Can-You-Guess poem. I liked the monorhyming tercets and the snail gives me a philosphical perspective. Perhaps that is the right pace for life.
What contest is this for? I don't see the contest name in this post.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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That's a clever way to have a Can-You-Guess poem. I liked the monorhyming tercets and the snail gives me a philosphical perspective. Perhaps that is the right pace for life.
What contest is this for? I don't see the contest name in this post.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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Thank you for reading, reviewing and your great comments. I will have to check this out about the contest.
Comment from Jeffrey Ford
I think that you wrote a very interesting poem! It was well written, and I love how you built up anticipation for finding at the end that it was a snail. Great story and thanks for sharing!
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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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I think that you wrote a very interesting poem! It was well written, and I love how you built up anticipation for finding at the end that it was a snail. Great story and thanks for sharing!
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Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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Thank you Jeffrey for reading, reviewing and your great comments.
