The Book of Retirement
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Where do we go from here"Short story about a fictive retirement
8 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, you are so right, my lady!! And, of course, you have a very sarcastic and entertaining way of putting it! :) :) Thanx for the smile midst the chaos! ;) Yvette
Well for starters it --> Well, for starters, it
the Go planet sign! --> the 'Go Planet' sign!
like in the Zoo --> like they are in the Zoo
Who knows, maybe they --> Who knows? Maybe they
catching it and releasing every --> catching and releasing it every
Bye, bye the Bahamas! --> Bye, bye Bahamas! OR Bye, bye to the Bahamas!
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Oh, you are so right, my lady!! And, of course, you have a very sarcastic and entertaining way of putting it! :) :) Thanx for the smile midst the chaos! ;) Yvette
Well for starters it --> Well, for starters, it
the Go planet sign! --> the 'Go Planet' sign!
like in the Zoo --> like they are in the Zoo
Who knows, maybe they --> Who knows? Maybe they
catching it and releasing every --> catching and releasing it every
Bye, bye the Bahamas! --> Bye, bye Bahamas! OR Bye, bye to the Bahamas!
Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
Comment from Mastery
Hi Iza. Cute little post here. I liked this especially well: "I was hoping to go fishing, but I'm in quarantine...quite indefinitely! So, I am practicing safe distancing with a bucket. I am doing a safe fishing method. I have taken my goldfish and I am catching it and releasing every half hour."
Very funny. :) Bob
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Hi Iza. Cute little post here. I liked this especially well: "I was hoping to go fishing, but I'm in quarantine...quite indefinitely! So, I am practicing safe distancing with a bucket. I am doing a safe fishing method. I have taken my goldfish and I am catching it and releasing every half hour."
Very funny. :) Bob
Comment Written 06-Aug-2020
Comment from lyenochka
But your kitties are happy you are home as they can't go to the Bahamas with you. And that poor goldfish! I'm thinking that goldfish is going to write a complaint to P&PC about being caught every half hour.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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But your kitties are happy you are home as they can't go to the Bahamas with you. And that poor goldfish! I'm thinking that goldfish is going to write a complaint to P&PC about being caught every half hour.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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MMM yeah, please put the goldfish in the P& PC section:)
Comment from royowen
I think there's a certain indefinite future fo we retirees, we don't know what the future holds because of this near invisible enemy that lurks to ambush the unsuspecting. And we're supposed to be vulnerable, well done Iza, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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I think there's a certain indefinite future fo we retirees, we don't know what the future holds because of this near invisible enemy that lurks to ambush the unsuspecting. And we're supposed to be vulnerable, well done Iza, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your precious feedback and I really appreciate your honesty.
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It does
Comment from estory
Your piece speaks of the frustrations we all feel in dealing with this virus. There seems to be no end in sight, there is no place to go, nothing to do but sit home. Day after day it drags on and on. Hang in there. My guess is they will have a vaccine by the end of the year. estory
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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Your piece speaks of the frustrations we all feel in dealing with this virus. There seems to be no end in sight, there is no place to go, nothing to do but sit home. Day after day it drags on and on. Hang in there. My guess is they will have a vaccine by the end of the year. estory
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your precious feedback and I really appreciate your honesty.
Comment from trimple
Hello there, Iza
This damned virus has buggered up every potential plan made this year it seems. Ah well... at least it isn't something like that bad ole, untreatable Bubonic Plague way back, or similar.
I loved your 'Go planet sign!'
All things pass, my friend, and this will too :)
Ps... maybe rotate the goldfishes a bit so as not to wear them out?
much love
trimple
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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Hello there, Iza
This damned virus has buggered up every potential plan made this year it seems. Ah well... at least it isn't something like that bad ole, untreatable Bubonic Plague way back, or similar.
I loved your 'Go planet sign!'
All things pass, my friend, and this will too :)
Ps... maybe rotate the goldfishes a bit so as not to wear them out?
much love
trimple
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your precious and funny feedback and I really appreciate your honesty.
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:)
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
The virus really has disrupted life as we know it and planned it. We just have to make new plans and learn to be happy with them. Adjustment is the key.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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The virus really has disrupted life as we know it and planned it. We just have to make new plans and learn to be happy with them. Adjustment is the key.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much my friend, I hope where you are things are normal.
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Getting there. Thailand doesn't put up with rebellious people.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
(illuminaty s/b illuminati--if you intend wordplay change ignoranty to ignoranti) Very clever--dark humor--love the golden fish (goldfish) bit. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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(illuminaty s/b illuminati--if you intend wordplay change ignoranty to ignoranti) Very clever--dark humor--love the golden fish (goldfish) bit. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Hi Liz, thank you so much for your review and grammar suggestions. Have a blessed day.
