Building Trust
Shared happiness can build trust39 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and
presentation, Jesse.
-It's good to see you and
hope you are doing well.
-I appreciate your note
and your poem, and I
am very glad to hear
about this experience.
-I am also glad that you
felt a sense of trust and
like you have a "brand new friend."
-I like your concluding verse, too.
-Have a great day and rest of your week:)
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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-Very nice image and
presentation, Jesse.
-It's good to see you and
hope you are doing well.
-I appreciate your note
and your poem, and I
am very glad to hear
about this experience.
-I am also glad that you
felt a sense of trust and
like you have a "brand new friend."
-I like your concluding verse, too.
-Have a great day and rest of your week:)
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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Hello Pam. Sorry for the delay in replying. No excuse...just life.
Thank you for your thorough commentary on my poem. I appreciate all the kind and encouraging words you say. I am glad you liked the whole presentation, as well as the concluding verse. Fortunate for me, I have had many other happy experiences and feelings since I posted this. Thank you for the excellent review and rating. Have a good upcoming week.
Jesse
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No problem about the delay, Jesse. I appreciate your reply, and I am very glad to hear that many other good things have been coming your way since this post. You deserve it. Have a great day and a very good week ahead.
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You too, Pam.
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Thanks, Jesse. I just read your poem, and I don't see any problems. I will review it tomorrow.
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Thanks in advance. I'll look forward to your review tomorrow.
Jesse
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You are welcome, Jesse.
Comment from rama devi
I love the uplifting, upbeat tone and positive message. Also love that dolphin pic! Perfect! Good flow. Just one spag snag to note:
they helped me building trust
for whom I'd held suspiciously at bay.
I suggest adding 'one' in line two to fix the grammar pertaining to FOR WHOM
they helped me building trust
for one whom I'd held suspiciously at bay
May more such happy moments blossom for you, daily!
Warmly,
rd
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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I love the uplifting, upbeat tone and positive message. Also love that dolphin pic! Perfect! Good flow. Just one spag snag to note:
they helped me building trust
for whom I'd held suspiciously at bay.
I suggest adding 'one' in line two to fix the grammar pertaining to FOR WHOM
they helped me building trust
for one whom I'd held suspiciously at bay
May more such happy moments blossom for you, daily!
Warmly,
rd
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Hi Rama! Thanks for the complements, and for the advice with a spag in the poem. I will edit it to add the word 'one' in that line right away. Thank you for the well wishes of more happy moments. l appreciate your help and kind comments. Thanks for all this, and for the excellent rating.
Take care,
Jesse
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Thanks, as always, dear Jesse, for your gracious response!
Warmly,
rd
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Yes, you and others have taught me well to be gracious when accepting critique. You're welcome.
Jesse
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:-)))) Yay!
Comment from dragonpoet
Jesse,
Happiness can bring on trust. Trust is hard to take and give. But once you do, it can change life immensely.
I like the choice of artwork.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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Jesse,
Happiness can bring on trust. Trust is hard to take and give. But once you do, it can change life immensely.
I like the choice of artwork.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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Hello Joan. Sorry for the delay in responding to your insightful review. I agree with your comments 100%. I am glad you liked my choice of artwork. Thank you for the excellent review and rating.
Stay well and take care,
Jesse
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Don't mention it, Jesse. It is what we are here to do.
Joan
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Thanks, Joan, for your support.
Jesse
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about building trust with a thought that brings out happiness is a wonderful way to start a new and lasting relationship with another, keep building step by step.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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A very well-written poem about building trust with a thought that brings out happiness is a wonderful way to start a new and lasting relationship with another, keep building step by step.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Sandra, for your very kind words and encouragement, with this review. I apologize for the delay in replying. No excuse...just life. I shall keep building relationships, step by step, with the help of finding commonalities among those I come in contact with. Thanks for the kind review and excellent rating.
Have a great upcoming week.
Take care,
Jesse
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an uplifting write Jesse and I am glad you shared some mutually agreeable conversation and thoughts here with a new friend, who knows where it will lead, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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This is an uplifting write Jesse and I am glad you shared some mutually agreeable conversation and thoughts here with a new friend, who knows where it will lead, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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Thanks Dolly, for your thoughtful and insightful review. I apologize for the delay in replying. No excuse...just life. I agree with your comments, "who knows where it will lead?" I am glad you enjoyed reading my poem. Thanks for the sincere review, and for the excellent rating.
Have a good day.
Take care,
Jesse
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your concise, moving poem describes a wonderful, warm experience.
Sometimes we carry suspicions or other hard feelings with us, and someone who befriends us helps us get over the negativity.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Your concise, moving poem describes a wonderful, warm experience.
Sometimes we carry suspicions or other hard feelings with us, and someone who befriends us helps us get over the negativity.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Yes, you are precisely right. I am suspicious much too often of other's motives. And I carry other hard feelings around with me. I'd like to get over the negativity, and share more happiness with people in my life. Thank you for this wonderful review, with all its insights and kind words.
Take care and stay well,
Jesse
Comment from royowen
The funny thing that happens to me after I've written something on a subject or that I've experienced. Within a short time I forget. Beautifully written Jesse, in lovely warm language, that communicates your language and the richness ofbthe experience, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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The funny thing that happens to me after I've written something on a subject or that I've experienced. Within a short time I forget. Beautifully written Jesse, in lovely warm language, that communicates your language and the richness ofbthe experience, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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Thanks, Roy, for the amusing anecdote. I hope to never forget the experience I wrote about. Trusting someone and building a friendship takes practice. In that, I will hopefully remember my start. I appreciate your comments on my "warm language." I've never heard it referred to in that manner. I am honored. Thank you for your kind review and for the excellent rating.
Enjoy your upcoming week.
Take care,
Jesse
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Blessings
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Building trust is not easy at it seems especially in times like ours. But there is still hope, so thank for reminding me that this is an essential part of being human.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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Building trust is not easy at it seems especially in times like ours. But there is still hope, so thank for reminding me that this is an essential part of being human.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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You're right, Iza, and I thank you for your important comments on an "essential part of" our human experience. I am glad this piece resonated with you. Thanks for the insightful review, and for the excellent rating. Sorry for the delay in responding.
Have a great upcoming week.
Take care,
Jesse
Comment from kahpot
Sounds like somebody built a wall at a very young age, it is funny how quickly and solidly we build those walls and throughout time we may tear down a brick-one only as this makes for a quick fix, I think if that wall has been smashed we should not rebuild it the same, change it as you seem to be doing here, an excellent read with a powerful message, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Sounds like somebody built a wall at a very young age, it is funny how quickly and solidly we build those walls and throughout time we may tear down a brick-one only as this makes for a quick fix, I think if that wall has been smashed we should not rebuild it the same, change it as you seem to be doing here, an excellent read with a powerful message, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Wow. Thank you for noticing the changes I've been through. You are a very astute observer. I like your philosophy on the walls we build early on, and how it is necessary to change to make life better. Your final comments are so kind and thoughtful. I am honored by your words. Thank you for this exceptional review and rating. Have a great rest of your week.
Take care,
Jesse
Comment from Irish Rain
Yay!
So glad that you stepped out
of your comfort zone, into a
new friendship!
Such a positive, happy poem
Mr. Jesse. Love the picture
of the dolphins frolicking too,
how appropriate!
Hope you do share more happiness!
Got your letter! Thanks!
Blessings...
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Yay!
So glad that you stepped out
of your comfort zone, into a
new friendship!
Such a positive, happy poem
Mr. Jesse. Love the picture
of the dolphins frolicking too,
how appropriate!
Hope you do share more happiness!
Got your letter! Thanks!
Blessings...
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Thanks so much, for this wonderfully positive review and exceptional rating! It was more of a leap, than a step, out of my comfort zone. I know that risks come with it but, now I feel open to trusting. I'm glad you liked my choice of a picture of, what I perceived as, trusting, happy dolphins. Sharing happiness feels great! It was quite an accomplishment to hand write that letter. I am happy you got it. Have a fine rest of your week.
Take care,
Jesse
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You too Mr. Jesse, get well and get home soon!!! Lovely poem!!
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Thanks! I am trying to get back home with the progress I am making. I can't wait! I'm so happy you love the poem!
Jesse
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I pray you're home soon!! Have a great week! Stay positive, you're almost there!
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With prayer and encouragement from you, it will be easy to stay positive and aim for home! Thanks so much!
Jesse
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You're welcome honey...sending you a piece of lemon/blueberry cake...virtually!! Enjoy!!
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Thanks! I love the sweet/sour taste!
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Happy Thursday!
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Happy Thursday to you too!
Jesse
