Comment from cdefan

Excellent

Great chapter and eyecatching artwork!
You kept me on the edge of my seat from beginning to the end. The story contines to keep me intrigued. I like the way you bring good into evil. Great writing!

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020

Thank you, cdefan :)

So glad you liked the cover! And thanks for all your encouraging words along with your support! It means a great deal to me.

Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

I'll bet they've never been given an ultimatum before, this related trio called the fury, follow us, or suffer much pain, pride can be a difficult foe to defeat, in fact it's just as lethal as any bomb, one can't be served by pride, it can only cause destruction, which is exactly what the proverb says. Your so good at connecting earth with heaven, well done dear Shana, another classic, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020

Thank you, dear friend :)

I do enjoy how the angels gave the Fury one more chance. I feel that God loves all and believes in second chances. If not, I would not be saved today. Bringing my imagination to paper is as close as I can get to bringing the bad guys to the good side. LOL!

Thanks for all your kind words and encouraging support. It means a lot to me.

Stay safe my friend!
Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 04-Aug-2020

You and me both Shana

Comment from Mistydawn

Exceptional

I don't know how long your chapters are but I seem to read through them in no time flat. Maybe because I get so engrossed in your story. It'll be interesting to see what he plans to do. Your chapter is well-written, interesting start to finish. As always, I look forward to reading more.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020

Thanks Mistydawn :)

This is actually just part of a chapter. Most of my chapters are 5-7 pages long. I quit adding the whole thing because it discouraged readers here, saying they were too long. I'm glad you get into the chapter like you said. That is very awesome to hear!

I just republished Sins of Chaos in Amazon. The photo of the 3 characters I placed with this is the new cover. Hopefully I will have sales.

Thanks again & stay safe my friend,
Shana :)

Comment from ngage

Excellent

Fantastic chapter, Ms Shana and love the artwork. Very eye catching!
It looks like the Fury was no match for God's fierce battle angels. I like how you gave them a second chance. Now I wonder what will become of Sebastian. Good cliff hanger!

Looking forward to reading more!

Nate

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020

Thanks so much, Nate :)

I'm glad you liked the chapter and the artwork. This is my new cover for Sins of Chaos. I hope it will grab reader's attention to buy it.

Thanks for all your support and kind words.
Safe safe!
Shana :)

Comment from fm wright

Exceptional

I could feel the tension mount there at the end. I like very much how you led up to it-very captivating. Really love the cover. It revealed enough of the characters without giving everything away, thus leading one to want to see what lies within the pages. Good work.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020

Thank you, Faye :)

I'm glad you liked the chapter and the cover. I'm hoping this new cover for Sins of Chaos will have good sales. I thought my artist did a good job with the characters.
Thanks for all your support! Stay safe my friend.

Hugs,
Shana :)

reply by fm wright on 05-Aug-2020

Always love supporting those whose writing I enjoy reading. May you, as well, stay safe, as you are in my prayers.
Faye

Comment from Melodie Michelle

Excellent

EXCELLENT story! The storyline is very creative and the characters interact well together;-)

It's sort of confusing, however, I'm sure it is because I haven't read the other chapters of your book;-)

Thank you so much for sharing;-)
May God bless you and your family;-)

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020

Thank you, Melodie :)

Glad you enjoyed the portion of my chapter. I do not add the whole thing because readers want something short here.
Yes, I'm sure you are a little lost since this is actually the fourth book in the series. There has been a lot going on, but thrilled you liked this one.

Thanks again and hope to hear from you again! Stay safe!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

reply by Melodie Michelle on 04-Aug-2020

;-)

Comment from TommyWrites

Excellent

I found this very interesting. I was slightly confused, only because I haven't read any of the other chapters. BUT, most of it made since, and it kept me on age. Plus the character reference guide did help. ;)
Your story flows very nicely, and just catching a glimspe at a very of the characters, I can tell I like them. I did, hehe, almost read Cronus as Corona. *faceplam* It's defianly an interesting story-plot, you have created here. Thanks for posting!
TommyWrites~

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020

Thank you, TommyWrites :)

Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Yes, this is close to the end of the book and the fourth series. So glad the story kept you interested and the character reference helped. I get new readers and I always like to hear it helped.
Cronus is close to Corona... haha! I think we all have that stuck in our minds.

Thanks again and hope to hear from you again.
Stay safe!

Sincerely,
Shana :)