Toss a coin
Silver lining poem4 total reviews
Comment from palmart
Positive message brings hope to reader, The silver lining brings the other side of the coin to view, despite it is not seen. And is the one that brings love!
Hard to believe that my comments are longer than your original writing!
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
Positive message brings hope to reader, The silver lining brings the other side of the coin to view, despite it is not seen. And is the one that brings love!
Hard to believe that my comments are longer than your original writing!
Comment Written 06-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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A very interesting review -thanks for sharing those sentiments zanya
Comment from mauial
I like the sentiment of your poem and wish that it was be as simple as that. But in reality that coin might land with hatred's side still up. I think that's basically what happens with voter's hoping for change.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
I like the sentiment of your poem and wish that it was be as simple as that. But in reality that coin might land with hatred's side still up. I think that's basically what happens with voter's hoping for change.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Yes it's true - thanks for sharing zanya
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Silver Lining writing prompt.
This short verse has a clear and very good message.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
I think this is a good entry for the Silver Lining writing prompt.
This short verse has a clear and very good message.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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And thanks for reviewing Zanya
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An uplifting write and love takes much less effort than hate which seems to sap our strength, a peaceful life is much more satisfying too, wise advice here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
An uplifting write and love takes much less effort than hate which seems to sap our strength, a peaceful life is much more satisfying too, wise advice here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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It's so true hatred saps our energy - thanks for reviewing zanya