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Passion ignites9 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
A fine entry for the 3-5-3 Passion writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines... good flow too. The presentation is nice.
I like his blue eyes reflect their passion.
Good job.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
A fine entry for the 3-5-3 Passion writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines... good flow too. The presentation is nice.
I like his blue eyes reflect their passion.
Good job.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 3-5-3 Passion writing prompt.
This short piece is truly about passion.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 3-5-3 Passion writing prompt.
This short piece is truly about passion.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 3-5-3 passion poem. It doesn't take too much to ignite the passion between two lovers who are meant for each other when the desire is within them.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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A very well-written 3-5-3 passion poem. It doesn't take too much to ignite the passion between two lovers who are meant for each other when the desire is within them.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, yes, I think the eyes can be the most alluring part of the body. When the right pair looks at you, and draws you in, there is no escaping, no denying and no resisting the passion that sweeps over you. Is it instant love or lust. Who knows? You are lost in her eyes.
Good entry.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Hmm, yes, I think the eyes can be the most alluring part of the body. When the right pair looks at you, and draws you in, there is no escaping, no denying and no resisting the passion that sweeps over you. Is it instant love or lust. Who knows? You are lost in her eyes.
Good entry.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Eternal Muse
A very nice love poem. You packed volumes in these lines - they spell love, desire, longing - and what a great picture!
I wish you luck in the contest - this will make a very strong entry.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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A very nice love poem. You packed volumes in these lines - they spell love, desire, longing - and what a great picture!
I wish you luck in the contest - this will make a very strong entry.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I think that when you're in tune with someone and have that connection, a look is sometimes all it takes, a subtle gesture. I like how you've presented this and enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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I think that when you're in tune with someone and have that connection, a look is sometimes all it takes, a subtle gesture. I like how you've presented this and enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your great review.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the 3-5-3 Passion writing prompt . It should do well. I wish you the best of luck!
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the 3-5-3 Passion writing prompt . It should do well. I wish you the best of luck!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your lovely review.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
Passion in a 3-5-3 syllable poem. Who makes the best poem with these ingredients? It is true that eyes are saying so much without needing many words, they can even ignite passion. So that was a good choice, and gives this poem possibilities. My question: "desire" does that count two or three syllables?
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Passion in a 3-5-3 syllable poem. Who makes the best poem with these ingredients? It is true that eyes are saying so much without needing many words, they can even ignite passion. So that was a good choice, and gives this poem possibilities. My question: "desire" does that count two or three syllables?
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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You are right thanks for having my back, I still have time to correct it. Thanks.
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You are very welcome! Smile.
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I had two versions of the poem and entered the wrong one. Thanks again.
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It's ok. I am glad you found that out in time.
Comment from oliver818
This is a nice poemc I enjoyed reading your and It's perfect for this competition. It flows well and has a nice feel to it. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day. Best of luck with the competition as well.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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This is a nice poemc I enjoyed reading your and It's perfect for this competition. It flows well and has a nice feel to it. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day. Best of luck with the competition as well.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your inspiring words.
