Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.

Excellent

This is a great entry for the 100 Word Flash Fiction writing prompt. I was glued to it from the beginning to the end. I hope this story does well in the contest. Good luck!

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020

Thank you very much

Comment from Susan X Smith

Excellent

I did see it coming that you were somehow pulling the reader's leg and the inuendos were not quite what they seemed. I never guessed braces, though. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020

Thank you very much

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This one-hundred-word flash fiction story, A Perfect Fit, has the proper word count and brings the reader Too Close for Comfort.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020

Thank you very much.

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hello Mystery Writer!
I love it and your "corrupted mind!"
Your writing is smooth and easy to follow - as is your story line. And of course, the ending is priceless!

Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!
diane

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 Comment Written 02-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020

Thank you very much