Three Reminders About God.
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Comment from Ulla
First I would like to say that this poem is really very well written. It shows your profound faith and the belief in it. I can't say I have that, but that doesn't prevent me from enjoying your poem. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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First I would like to say that this poem is really very well written. It shows your profound faith and the belief in it. I can't say I have that, but that doesn't prevent me from enjoying your poem. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 21-May-2021
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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Thank you so very much for reading and reviewing my spiritual poem. I believe, God wants to have a personal relationship with everyone. I would invite you, and encourage you, to just be open to that possibility. I believe when someone is open to the possibility of a relationship with God, a unique connection will take place. Thank you for the five beautiful stars that you have awarded me! Embrace the love from above.
Comment from Aussie
Really appreciated your words of faith in the Lord. 'When we are weak, then we are strong." God holds us in the palm of His hand and even if we don't agree with the outcome, He knows and sees far beyond what we can possibly imagine. How wonderful is our god. K xx
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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Really appreciated your words of faith in the Lord. 'When we are weak, then we are strong." God holds us in the palm of His hand and even if we don't agree with the outcome, He knows and sees far beyond what we can possibly imagine. How wonderful is our god. K xx
Comment Written 21-May-2021
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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Thank you so very much K for reading and then reviewing my poem Three Reminders About God. Thank you for your kind words and the marvelous gift you gave me of six beautiful stars. Blessings my sister.
Comment from kiwisteveh
A pleasantly rhyming abcb poem that also posts a strong message of religious faith. There is no regular meter, but the strong rhyming makes up for that.
I like the use of the poem's structure to highlight three facets of that faith - basically one per stanza.
Steve
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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A pleasantly rhyming abcb poem that also posts a strong message of religious faith. There is no regular meter, but the strong rhyming makes up for that.
I like the use of the poem's structure to highlight three facets of that faith - basically one per stanza.
Steve
Comment Written 20-May-2021
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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Thank you so very much Steve. I'll tell you a secret if you won't tell anybody. I don't have the foggiest idea what meter is. I should probably learn so I could put meter in my next poem. LOL Thanks for not only reading But for reviewing my poem. Thanks for the five beautiful stars.
Comment from Deborah Mosher
This was beautifully written. I loved this, and the messaging of it is so important and profound. You did amazing- and even without the contest- this poem is a winner.
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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This was beautifully written. I loved this, and the messaging of it is so important and profound. You did amazing- and even without the contest- this poem is a winner.
Comment Written 20-May-2021
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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Thank you so much Deborah for your kind words and the beautiful five stars you gave me. I appreciate the fact that not only did you read it but you reviewed it! LOL Thanks for the five beautiful stars.
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
I really love your poem and read it when I needed to hear your words. It's beautiful and up lifting. It's reassuring we have a God who loves us and in Him we can trust.
Best wishes in the contest.
Blessings, Cindy
reply by the author on 20-May-2021
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I really love your poem and read it when I needed to hear your words. It's beautiful and up lifting. It's reassuring we have a God who loves us and in Him we can trust.
Best wishes in the contest.
Blessings, Cindy
Comment Written 20-May-2021
reply by the author on 20-May-2021
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Thank you so very much Sandy for taking the time to both read and review my: "Three reminders about God." Embrace the love from above.
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You?re welcome Dr. Nad. Your photo is nice and the baby is beautiful.
Cindy
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Thank you Cindy for the comment on the picture. That is one of my identical twin granddaughters who are 12 years old now. That picture was taken the day before my daughter got married. The two girls were flower girls for their aunt's wedding.
Comment from pharp
DR. NAD,
You did an excellent job in the penning of this beautiful poem.
A very profound and powerful message. Great words of wisdom and most enjoyable read. Excellent rhyming throughout with a very smooth flow. Thanks for the additional blessings shown of your three pillars of unshakable truths in your authors' notes
Thanks for sharing.
Blessings...Portia
reply by the author on 20-May-2021
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DR. NAD,
You did an excellent job in the penning of this beautiful poem.
A very profound and powerful message. Great words of wisdom and most enjoyable read. Excellent rhyming throughout with a very smooth flow. Thanks for the additional blessings shown of your three pillars of unshakable truths in your authors' notes
Thanks for sharing.
Blessings...Portia
Comment Written 20-May-2021
reply by the author on 20-May-2021
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Thank you so very much for taking the time to both read and review my poem: "Three Reminders About God". Your words of encouragement are much appreciated as well. And thank you so very much for those five wonderful stars! Embrace the love from above.
Comment from roof35
Contest or no contest, this is a well written poem and a lovely tribute to your faith. The picture, of course, pairs perfectly. Thank you for sharing this poem.
reply by the author on 20-May-2021
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Contest or no contest, this is a well written poem and a lovely tribute to your faith. The picture, of course, pairs perfectly. Thank you for sharing this poem.
Comment Written 20-May-2021
reply by the author on 20-May-2021
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Thank you so very much for taking the time to both read and review my poem: "Three Reminders About God". Your words of encouragement are much appreciated as well. And thank you so very much for those five wonderful stars! Embrace the love from above.
Comment from Sherry Asbury
He promoted it so that I might have the pleasure and divine words of God!
It is very well-written, without overdone verbiage... Speaking from the heart always touches another heart.
One suggestion in your second paragraph - I would not put a comma after
"my God is good, all of the time" it has more continuity and flow without the punctuation...my opinion and easily discarded *smiles*
reply by the author on 20-May-2021
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He promoted it so that I might have the pleasure and divine words of God!
It is very well-written, without overdone verbiage... Speaking from the heart always touches another heart.
One suggestion in your second paragraph - I would not put a comma after
"my God is good, all of the time" it has more continuity and flow without the punctuation...my opinion and easily discarded *smiles*
Comment Written 20-May-2021
reply by the author on 20-May-2021
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Thank you so very much for taking the time to both read and review my poem: "Three Reminders About God". Your words of encouragement are much appreciated as well. I made the change! And thank you so very much for those five wonderful stars! Embrace the love from above.
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God keep you safe!
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Comment from lyenochka
Wow! This is such a beautiful hymn of faith! I wish it had been in the Faith poetry contest but I see this was posted last year. And what a great year to have this poem to remember God's goodness, trustworthiness, and His amazing love. Remembering His attributes is a great way to keep us grounded and in His peace. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 20-May-2021
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Wow! This is such a beautiful hymn of faith! I wish it had been in the Faith poetry contest but I see this was posted last year. And what a great year to have this poem to remember God's goodness, trustworthiness, and His amazing love. Remembering His attributes is a great way to keep us grounded and in His peace. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 20-May-2021
reply by the author on 20-May-2021
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Thank you so very much for taking the time to both read and review my poem: "Three Reminders About God". Your words of encouragement are much appreciated as well. And thank you so very much for those five wonderful stars! Embrace the love from above.
Comment from Laurie Holding
I sympathize on your missing your promotion window, and think FanStory should send a notification on the day of any voting booth you've entered. If not, I find myself having to check every single day, thereby falling down the Rabbit Hole of FanStory world, lol.
I loved this poem, admire your strong faith, and think you've worked rhyme and rhythm with grace. The only constructive criticism I would offer would be that were it not for your author/poet notes at the bottom, I wouldn't be able to clearly discern your three pillars. Frankly, I think you could leave the poem as is and just change your title, unless you really want to emphasize the number Three. If so, you probably need to rework the poem a bit, just to put understandable bullets next to 1) the goodness of God (Maybe by a simple "First...") 2) His trustworthiness and 3) the guarantee of His love.
But personally, I think the number is just your beginning structure, how you framed it in your own head before writing, and now that it's built, you can toss away the original scaffolding.
Nice job. Sorry I missed the vote.
reply by the author on 20-May-2021
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I sympathize on your missing your promotion window, and think FanStory should send a notification on the day of any voting booth you've entered. If not, I find myself having to check every single day, thereby falling down the Rabbit Hole of FanStory world, lol.
I loved this poem, admire your strong faith, and think you've worked rhyme and rhythm with grace. The only constructive criticism I would offer would be that were it not for your author/poet notes at the bottom, I wouldn't be able to clearly discern your three pillars. Frankly, I think you could leave the poem as is and just change your title, unless you really want to emphasize the number Three. If so, you probably need to rework the poem a bit, just to put understandable bullets next to 1) the goodness of God (Maybe by a simple "First...") 2) His trustworthiness and 3) the guarantee of His love.
But personally, I think the number is just your beginning structure, how you framed it in your own head before writing, and now that it's built, you can toss away the original scaffolding.
Nice job. Sorry I missed the vote.
Comment Written 20-May-2021
reply by the author on 20-May-2021
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Thank you so very much for taking the time to both read and review my poem: "Three Reminders About God". Your words of encouragement are much appreciated as well. I can see your point, thanks for pointing out my lack of clarity. And thank you so very much for those five wonderful stars! Embrace the love from above.
