Callow's climb...
A rhyming sestet.16 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Hard to remember sometimes, but so very important to maintain our sanity and our focus in these crazy times, Roy -- such a beautiful offering in unique rhyme! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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Hard to remember sometimes, but so very important to maintain our sanity and our focus in these crazy times, Roy -- such a beautiful offering in unique rhyme! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 06-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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Thanks so much Yvette, for these special comments and super review, blessings, Roy
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I know that I thought and felt like I didn't have much worth until the Lord came along one day and transformed my life. Thank God for that blessed day that He opened my eyes to what He thought about me. That's the only mirror we need to look into. Not what others think or how they look at us. This is good work brother and I enjoyed reading this uplifting, inspirational and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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I know that I thought and felt like I didn't have much worth until the Lord came along one day and transformed my life. Thank God for that blessed day that He opened my eyes to what He thought about me. That's the only mirror we need to look into. Not what others think or how they look at us. This is good work brother and I enjoyed reading this uplifting, inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thank so much Jeffrey, for these brilliant comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from judiverse
This is a reassuring poem. There is a place for everyone, and everyone is a child of God. Some people feel they have no value, but they can rest assured the God values them. Excellent presentation, and your rhyme is great. Crest works well for adding an extra touch to your monorhyme in the last stanza. judi
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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This is a reassuring poem. There is a place for everyone, and everyone is a child of God. Some people feel they have no value, but they can rest assured the God values them. Excellent presentation, and your rhyme is great. Crest works well for adding an extra touch to your monorhyme in the last stanza. judi
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thank so much Judy, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written sestet to ensure they reader they are a child of God. It is amazing how God validates our thoughts when someone else say the same things to emphasize our thoughts.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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A very well-written sestet to ensure they reader they are a child of God. It is amazing how God validates our thoughts when someone else say the same things to emphasize our thoughts.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thank so much Sandra, for these brilliant comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from ESOSTINE
It's truly God, the Creator's command that with faith as little as mustard seed we can achieve the unimaginable, the sky is out limit. Thanks for sharing your inspiration
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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It's truly God, the Creator's command that with faith as little as mustard seed we can achieve the unimaginable, the sky is out limit. Thanks for sharing your inspiration
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Thanks so much for these terrific comments and lovely comments, Blessings Roy
Comment from lyenochka
Beautiful! Am so glad that you shared that - and the Spirit inspired you to write this so it resonated with you when you heard the message today. Praise Jesus in Whom we have such worth.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Beautiful! Am so glad that you shared that - and the Spirit inspired you to write this so it resonated with you when you heard the message today. Praise Jesus in Whom we have such worth.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Thanks Helen, for lovely comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from amada
Your poem is very nice and it has a very nice presentation. Your lines are nice, and in a way merciful. My favorite line "So please believe..." This is a very uplifting poem.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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Your poem is very nice and it has a very nice presentation. Your lines are nice, and in a way merciful. My favorite line "So please believe..." This is a very uplifting poem.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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Thanks so much for these super comments and lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from Teri7
Roy, This is a very beautiful, true and well written poem you have penned. God does love all His children and He will use us for His glory. Thank you my friend. May God bless and protect you and your family! Teri
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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Roy, This is a very beautiful, true and well written poem you have penned. God does love all His children and He will use us for His glory. Thank you my friend. May God bless and protect you and your family! Teri
Comment Written 02-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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Thanks so much Teri, for these splendid comments and a lovely review, Feeling OK? blessings, Roy
Comment from Lucy de Welles
Yes. What a lovely and timely reminder. For me to live IS Christ. Keep moving on and flowing with the Holy Spirit. Could we with ink, the ocean fill, and were the skies, of parchment made. Were every tongue on Earth a quill, and every man a scribe by trade. To write the love, of God above, would drain the ocean dry. Nor would the scroll, contain the whole, though stretched from sky to sky...
Have a great day!
xxLucy
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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Yes. What a lovely and timely reminder. For me to live IS Christ. Keep moving on and flowing with the Holy Spirit. Could we with ink, the ocean fill, and were the skies, of parchment made. Were every tongue on Earth a quill, and every man a scribe by trade. To write the love, of God above, would drain the ocean dry. Nor would the scroll, contain the whole, though stretched from sky to sky...
Have a great day!
xxLucy
Comment Written 02-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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You know that beautiful poem Lucy, I wish I?d wrote that. This young man shared his story of struggle, and realised that Christ wants to use the most humble of vessels, He confounds the wise to bring His wisdom, and He adores the humble, and crowns them with His wisdom and honour. How great is God? Bless you Roy
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When I was a teenager, I used to play the piano in church. So I know most of the stanzas for most of the hymns...Nails in sure places :)
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It?s amazing how music can reenforce and shape us Lucy.
Comment from richie b
Roy,
For many I don't think they realize, they are a child
of God. Some give up the thought from feeling guilty
of sin.
I have to remind myself that I am a true heir to
belonging to the Kingdom of God.
Thank you for this poem reinforcing the Love that
God graces upon us all.
Many Blessings,
Richie
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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Roy,
For many I don't think they realize, they are a child
of God. Some give up the thought from feeling guilty
of sin.
I have to remind myself that I am a true heir to
belonging to the Kingdom of God.
Thank you for this poem reinforcing the Love that
God graces upon us all.
Many Blessings,
Richie
Comment Written 02-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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Thanks Richie for these wonderful comments and review, blessings, Roy
